Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Story #44: Who Is It?

27 comments:

  1. Nooooooo....How can you end it like that!!?? :) You must write more!
    Your use of allusions adds a humorous touch to the serious situation.

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  2. Should have kept going with it. Funny story!

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  3. Quality story, but I would have liked it see more. It ended too soon.

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  4. You kind of shot a police officer.... Gee I wonder what you did! Made me laugh, Love the story

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  5. You forgot you didn't have pants on?! What? Funny story.

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  6. I think there was something wrong with that cop. He's so strict with the law and assumed that it was Jordan that was the drug-drealer. Really good story.

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  7. Good story. I would have liked to see more, but good overall.

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  8. You should have kept going! What a funny story! I was Lol'ing the whole time tbh, haha.

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  9. Good story. I like the humor towards the beginning.

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  10. This story was intense I wish I got to know who really was it :)

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  11. I hate it when people speed especially when they go 1mph above it. That just grinds my gears.

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  12. WHO WAS IT?
    Great story, I enjoyed it

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  13. Very suspenseful! I don't think you should be able to suspect something not true!

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  14. Suspenseful! I need to know whoooo!

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  15. There should've been more at the end! But very funny good storyy.!

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  16. More Jordan! Great job! No! Not on the purple Macho Man shirt!

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