This was really good and sad, but i enjoyed it a lot
I enjoyed the story, and I like how the characters are easy to compare to real people in our everyday lives.
I myself am a fan of "The Walking Dead". This was great!
Your story was written really well! GOOD JOB
The story was great! It was easy to picture the story, and to relate the whole story.
Very descriptive details and interesting ending!
Very creative, there were lots of good details
I enjoyed it. It was a good zambie story
Very well written good job!
I really liked this story. You have a true writing talent.
I caught those Walking Dead references. Good Story
Great Story, lots of detail
Really good story, I was actually pulled in
Great Story..Sad they had to die though!
Nice story.. kind of sad at the end though
I really liked it and it was written well.
Really good story, loved the moral.
I LOVE THIS STORY! AMAZING PLOT!! :)
Great plot! I really loved this story c:
Jason is the greatest character of all time.
It was well written and kept me reading!
I usually don't like zombie stories, vampire stories or werewolf stories but I really enjoyed this one. Very descriptive. Kept me reading
Very well-written and creative! The moral was a nice addition.
I really liked the motivational ending
Very well written. I loved the action!
I love the action and zombie setting!
I liked how interesting the story was
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I really liked the action! Very good.
Absolutely loved it! Couldn't find a thing wrong with it! Great description and story line. Great job!
good story,i like the detail
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