Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Story #8: Another Zombie Story

35 comments:

  1. This was really good and sad, but i enjoyed it a lot

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  2. I enjoyed the story, and I like how the characters are easy to compare to real people in our everyday lives.

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  3. I myself am a fan of "The Walking Dead". This was great!

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  4. Your story was written really well! GOOD JOB

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  5. The story was great! It was easy to picture the story, and to relate the whole story.

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  6. Very descriptive details and interesting ending!

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  7. Very creative, there were lots of good details

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  8. I enjoyed it. It was a good zambie story

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  9. I really liked this story. You have a true writing talent.

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  10. I caught those Walking Dead references. Good Story

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  11. Really good story, I was actually pulled in

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  12. Great Story..Sad they had to die though!

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  13. Nice story.. kind of sad at the end though

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  14. I really liked it and it was written well.

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  15. Really good story, loved the moral.

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  16. I LOVE THIS STORY! AMAZING PLOT!! :)

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  17. Great plot! I really loved this story c:

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  18. Jason is the greatest character of all time.

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  19. It was well written and kept me reading!

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  20. I usually don't like zombie stories, vampire stories or werewolf stories but I really enjoyed this one. Very descriptive. Kept me reading

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  21. Very well-written and creative! The moral was a nice addition.

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  22. I really liked the motivational ending

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  23. Very well written. I loved the action!

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  24. I love the action and zombie setting!

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  25. I liked how interesting the story was

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  27. I really liked the action! Very good.

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  28. Absolutely loved it! Couldn't find a thing wrong with it! Great description and story line. Great job!

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