Woah that was pretty intense, but overall it was a well written
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Wow!! Plot twist, the mother is the KILLER! Good story
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This was a fabulous story, even if the end was spoiled by a spoiler child
YOU KNOW YOU'RE JUST JEALOUS!! Just because u didn't get to be a spoiler child doesn't mean you have to take it out on me! LOLOL. #GetOnMyLevel
I absolutely loved the plot twist! Great story! :)
I read the comments before I read the story. Spoilers! It was a well written story, and I was truly attached in reading it.
WHAT THE NAME OF STEPHEN KING DID I JUST READ?! Good story, by the way.
Quite the plot twist. Good and well written story.
Great plot twist! (Even though I knew what was going to happen) lol
What a twist.
Wowzers. I really liked this story. The plot was fantastic and it was REALLY well written.
I knew it when she offered to make supper! Very well written
As soon as the mom said she was going to make the meal, I knew something was up lol.
That was truly a labor day weekend
The whole time I was thinking don't eat the food and what does he do he ate the food. :P
I just realized I didn't actually comment on the story itself. Very well written; love the foreshadowing!
Major plot twist! I can't believe a mother would do that! Crazy!
HOLY COW WHAT THE HECK.... IM SPEECHLESS. Even knowing the spoiler before reading the story still makes it interesting.
I didn't read the comments before reading the story! so HA. What a crazy twist!!
Wow..... didn't see that coming ;)
Did not see that one coming!
The ending was crazy! I couldn't believe it was the mother?
holy plot twist!
What the plot twist!
very well written and good plot twist
Whoa that plot twist! Great story~
Very good loved the plot!
I saw that coming. And i'm not happy about the husbands death! What a terrible mother! But good plot..
Love the plot twist
Poor guys! I knew that was going to happen! Great story.
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