Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Story #38: Labor Day Weekend

36 comments:

  1. Woah that was pretty intense, but overall it was a well written

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    1. ******DO NOT READ ANY FURTHER IF YOU HAVE NOT READ THE STORY!****


      HUGE SPOILER BELOW.




      DON'T LOOK!



      I SAID DON'T LOOK!



      Now you're going to look, aren't you?



      ( \_/ )
      ( o.o)
      (___)0




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      Eyes back up...nothing to see down here.

      Read the story and you can return...

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    2. My little pictures didn't turn out like I planned. Oops. The first was a cute little bunny rabbit.


      The next was a guy giving you the sour ~ face look.

      Now you have to scroll back up to see them again, don't ya? ;)

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  2. Wow!! Plot twist, the mother is the KILLER! Good story

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    1. SPOILER ALERT Thanks CourtSport...

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    2. This was a fabulous story, even if the end was spoiled by a spoiler child

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    3. YOU KNOW YOU'RE JUST JEALOUS!! Just because u didn't get to be a spoiler child doesn't mean you have to take it out on me! LOLOL. #GetOnMyLevel

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  3. I absolutely loved the plot twist! Great story! :)

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  4. I read the comments before I read the story. Spoilers! It was a well written story, and I was truly attached in reading it.

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  5. WHAT THE NAME OF STEPHEN KING DID I JUST READ?! Good story, by the way.

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  6. Quite the plot twist. Good and well written story.

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  7. Great plot twist! (Even though I knew what was going to happen) lol

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  8. Wowzers. I really liked this story. The plot was fantastic and it was REALLY well written.

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  9. I knew it when she offered to make supper! Very well written

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  10. As soon as the mom said she was going to make the meal, I knew something was up lol.

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  11. The whole time I was thinking don't eat the food and what does he do he ate the food. :P

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  12. I just realized I didn't actually comment on the story itself. Very well written; love the foreshadowing!

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  13. Major plot twist! I can't believe a mother would do that! Crazy!

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  14. HOLY COW WHAT THE HECK.... IM SPEECHLESS. Even knowing the spoiler before reading the story still makes it interesting.

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  15. I didn't read the comments before reading the story! so HA. What a crazy twist!!

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  16. Wow..... didn't see that coming ;)

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  17. The ending was crazy! I couldn't believe it was the mother?

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  18. very well written and good plot twist

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  19. I saw that coming. And i'm not happy about the husbands death! What a terrible mother! But good plot..

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  20. Poor guys! I knew that was going to happen! Great story.

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