Monday, October 20, 2014

Story #2: Not Only My Best Friend

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  3. I really liked your story. I thought it was very cute.

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  4. Great story! I liked the idea you were going with

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  5. I really like the plot of the story. It was really cute and heart warming

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  6. Loved this story. Great idea for s story!

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  7. I love this story. Good plot and I loved how soft and touching it was

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  8. Very cute idea and loved the ending!

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  9. I love this story! Melted my heart :)

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  10. The winner for Most Heart Warming goes to you. Loved the plot twist.

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  11. Loved the plot twist. This story was really sweet :)

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  12. Major plot twist. I loved how this story can actually relate to some people and while parts of it were sad, it had a great outcome.

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  13. Chills, Lots of Chills. In a good way. Great Story!

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  14. You would think the title would tip me off, but nooooo. Now it has even more meaning. :)

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  15. So sweet! I just love happy endings.

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  16. I loved the story, warm fuzzy feelings :3

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    1. truly a work of art and wizardry. 8/8 really gr8 m8.

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  19. I thought it was very well thought out

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  20. Awesome Story! The ending was really good, Honestly it surprised me!

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  21. i liked how she turned out to be her sister!

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  22. It was a great story and Had a great ending

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  23. I really liked the plot twist! Very good!

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  24. I like what it was about. The family finally coming together. I want to know if they finally stayed there or if the dad married the mom.

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