Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Story #4: What Is Truth?

33 comments:

  1. I liked the Idea, it was creative

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  2. The story was super creative and the cliff hanger was on point. Also, the futuristic setting was perfect for this story.

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  3. Nice plot twist I really enjoyed it

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  4. I voted it best futuristic reality.

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  5. Love the futuristic setting, and the cliffhanger at the end made me wish there was more to read!

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  6. All I can say is "Twins Basil, twins."

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  7. Makes me wonder what could be next!

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  8. I love that he was working on his English short story within the story. :) I seriously hope you keep writing this story. It's so interesting. It sounds like the beginnings of an excellent dystopian novel.

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  9. I like the cliffhanger at the end, it leaves you wanting to low what the truth is.

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  10. I really like the suspense. Got me wanting to read more.

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  11. This story was really good! The cliffhanger was perfect, but now you just need to write more!!

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  12. I wish there was more to read! I really enjoyed this story!

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  13. I really enjoyed how this story was written. I hope you write the rest of it!

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  14. KEEP WRITTING THE STORY :D :) :P :)

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  15. i really like the story plot its very interesting

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  16. I liked the suspense and the telepathic communication!

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  17. The plot of this story was very well written. Loved it!

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  18. I like all the description you use in the story

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