Well I guess you should be careful what you wish for. Loved the ending.
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Oh nook did he die!? Awwww.... ehh still a cute story! (:
I enjoyed reading about Paul and his wife
Good set up/outline of the story. Well put together.
I loved how he wished to have one last cup with her and the ending of this story was the perfect way to end the plot.
Loved it when he wanted to share one last cup of coffee with his wife!
I thought this story was absolutely adorable(:
So cute how he gets to see his wife again.
Loved the amazing plot twist. it was just amazing! :)
Loved the plot twist! Adorable!
Last cup of coffee was so cute
This was a great story! I loved the last part with the coffee... So cute! :)
Crazy ending to the story!
What a twist!
Really good story!
It was good! Just got really confused at the end though! He died?
good story i liked it
The ending is so nice, and kind of sad!
Glad to know he whited for one last meal with his wife.
Last wish was cute but also sad at the end~ I liked the story
Paul truly did have three wishes.
I like this story, the end is nice too
Loved the three wishes!
The story was a really cute! But, I was confused at the end. Did Paul die?
The last wish. Wow. Bittersweet, for sure.Except the last line, I was like, "What just happened? When did he wish that?" So I think you could expand that part even further, or hint to us above that he had another secret wish.
I liked the story the ends a bit confusing though
Great story! Loved his three wishes!
Two of the three wishes were normal you know, money... sports cars.... infinite wealth, but the third was a major changing point in the story and it made it all the better.
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