Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Story #13: Paul's Three Wishes

34 comments:

  1. Well I guess you should be careful what you wish for. Loved the ending.

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  3. Oh nook did he die!? Awwww.... ehh still a cute story! (:

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  4. I enjoyed reading about Paul and his wife

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  5. Good set up/outline of the story. Well put together.

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  6. I loved how he wished to have one last cup with her and the ending of this story was the perfect way to end the plot.

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  7. Loved it when he wanted to share one last cup of coffee with his wife!

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  8. I thought this story was absolutely adorable(:

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  9. So cute how he gets to see his wife again.

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  10. Loved the amazing plot twist. it was just amazing! :)

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  11. Last cup of coffee was so cute

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  12. This was a great story! I loved the last part with the coffee... So cute! :)

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  13. It was good! Just got really confused at the end though! He died?

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  14. Glad to know he whited for one last meal with his wife.

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  15. Last wish was cute but also sad at the end~ I liked the story

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  16. The story was a really cute! But, I was confused at the end. Did Paul die?

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  17. The last wish. Wow. Bittersweet, for sure.
    Except the last line, I was like, "What just happened? When did he wish that?"
    So I think you could expand that part even further, or hint to us above that he had another secret wish.

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  18. I liked the story the ends a bit confusing though

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  19. Great story! Loved his three wishes!

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  20. Two of the three wishes were normal you know, money... sports cars.... infinite wealth, but the third was a major changing point in the story and it made it all the better.

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