Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Story #43: The Big Move

21 comments:

  1. Well that was a nice story very good.

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  2. Wow, I really like this story! Glad they ended up together and everything worked out.

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  3. I'm glad they ended up together. I really liked this story :)

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  4. Matthew is a jerk. I think Scarlett should have said, "You missed your chance, Buddy."

    And maybe because I'm an English teacher and love to find symbols in literature, but it seems symbolic that her name is Scarlett, or "Scar" as Matthew called her...

    Seriously, though, this was a cute story.

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  5. Good story. It had me hooked all the way through. "...it all works out." :)

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  6. Love how you get to read about their lives as they continue to grow up.

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  7. Very well written story! I liked the ending.

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  8. Awesome how they went to same college that was unexpected

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  9. Its crazy how something can turn out bad but end up good! So happy they got back together!

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  10. Wow! I loved the ending that everything happened for a reason.

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  11. I loved the ending how they found each other unexpectedly.

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  12. I didn't see that coming at all, but it was for sure a good surprise :)

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  13. cute story, but I really really don't like Matthew!

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