Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Story #10: Untitled (1)

32 comments:

  1. This story was so cute I loved the ending :)

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  2. This is gotta be the most saddest story I've readed. The author of this story has a direct line to my tears.

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  3. Great. It discusses the real problem that some have when they develop affections for someone who they know is no good for them.

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  4. I like how she ended up choosing the right guy in the end.

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  5. I was kinda rooting for Beau but I'm happy with the decision she made my choosing Dru. Very good story :)

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  6. Officially stealing "Perfect isn't perfect unless it is you and me". I like this story! I went through something similar to this!

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  7. So much romance. I love the cute ending.

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  8. Happy with who she picked! Good story

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  9. I like how easy it is to relate to this story

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  10. It discussed a common problem with girls our age. Glad this was wrote.

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  11. Sweet Story, glad she chose the boy who always cared for her.

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  12. Great decision at the end. Typical high school relationship probs.

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  13. I liked this story very much! The romance element was very well expressed.

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  14. cute story, and the conflict I feel is very relatable

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  15. Great story! Dru would be the best character in any story! Such a good guy!

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  16. i like your characters names! very original!

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  17. Cute story, I like her inner conflict c:

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  18. Never let a guy (or girl!) treat you like dirt. There are waaaaaayyyyyyy too many fish in the sea to go through life in a toxic relationship. Glad Aaliyah learned this early. Hope she never forgets it, either. :)

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  19. This was a cute story! I love romantic stories.

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  20. I agree with Mrs. Orman! great ending! good Choice!

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  21. Loved how she ended up with the good guy and loved your saying "perfect isn't perfect unless it's you and me!"

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