This story was definitely different, but nonetheless it was good.
Good description and interesting story! Nice names, btw c:
This story was very interesting, but good! I also thought the names were interesting. lol
This was an interesting story. Well written and the names were cool.
This story was very interesting, but still a good story
A very off ending but I liked it all the same
Beyonce, "Who dat!."
The character names kept me reading.
The characters' names were really funny :3
Very interesting plot. But well written
Well written story and love the makeup added to it. I love Sephora!
Interesting moral, great story
Interesting! Creative names
i liked how Beyonce was in it
Ehhh, I still love old people.
That truly was Kandee's Krazy last day
Good Story! Funny names!
Crazy old lady... I knew from the beginning she was a psycho
Crazy old people, can't trust them...
I agree with Orman7. People are crazy. Great story!
Some people are crazy! Good Story!!
I feel bad for Kandee
I kept thinking, "No! Don't stay late! Get the heck out of there!" Because, stereotypically, that's when the crazy ax-murdering grandma would jump out of the shadows and kill all the characters. So good job with the plot twist!
Good story very well written.
Great Story! Crazy people!
Scared of Old People? That would probably be hard to do..Kandee was really funny though :)
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