Saturday, October 25, 2014

Story # 31: Kandee's Krazy Last Day

31 comments:

  1. This story was definitely different, but nonetheless it was good.

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  2. Good description and interesting story! Nice names, btw c:

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  3. This story was very interesting, but good! I also thought the names were interesting. lol

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  4. This was an interesting story. Well written and the names were cool.

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  5. This story was very interesting, but still a good story

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  6. A very off ending but I liked it all the same

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  7. The character names kept me reading.

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  8. Very interesting plot. But well written

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  9. Well written story and love the makeup added to it. I love Sephora!

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  10. Interesting moral, great story

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  11. Crazy old lady... I knew from the beginning she was a psycho

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  12. Crazy old people, can't trust them...

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  13. I agree with Orman7. People are crazy. Great story!

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  14. Some people are crazy! Good Story!!

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  15. I kept thinking, "No! Don't stay late! Get the heck out of there!" Because, stereotypically, that's when the crazy ax-murdering grandma would jump out of the shadows and kill all the characters. So good job with the plot twist!

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  16. Scared of Old People? That would probably be hard to do..Kandee was really funny though :)

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