Really good. It was intense and kept me reading!!
The authors attention to detail is flowing throughout the story very well. Loved it.
Intruder was absolutely perfect. This story was written VERY well, I loved it.
I felt like I was really there! I was scared for her. Great Job!
Really kept me reading, nice cliff hanger
Awesome story I love how she saved the cat still.
I loved the Cliff hanger at the end! it was really good! i thought it was really well written and brilliant!
Great idea for a story! Like BRICK(: said- brilliant idea. Never wanted it to end.
I loved reading this story!:)
Great story, loved the cliff hanger!
This reminds me of a movie trailer. Very descriptive!
Amazing story liked the suspense
Very Intense scary to think something like that could happen!
The makings of a mystery novel in my opinion.
Amazing story and good suspense
I like the story and the ending! The ending really leaves you with questions.
loved the ending!
What an amazing intruder.
That is an amazing story
Amazing story! You need to write more! This could be a great mystery novel. :)
Intense and suspenseful! I loved this story ~ (:
You wrote this very well! Amazing plot!
Kept my attention! Very organized!
Very well written story! Kept me reading the whole time. Frightening and scary but very very good!
the description of the intruder being built like a brick wall was awesome!
Great cliff hanger!
Very well written! Loved your descriptions! Loved the suspense!
I thought I had already commented on this one. Oops!It is soooo intense! The intruder is seriously creepy, too. Gave me chills. Well done!
i like this. its a pretty good story
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