Friday, October 24, 2014

Story #24: The African Safari

32 comments:

  1. Click Click Boom. Thats a pretty decent song, and this story is decent too! Love the ending, it made me laugh.

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  2. I liked the setting, good story

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  3. Interesting Characters. It was a reasonable story.

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  4. i liked you characters names< kept it interesting!

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  5. i liked then name click click boom

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  6. It's always the quiet ones that get ya.

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  7. The story was good and had great description throughout.

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  8. Nice story I really liked the names!

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  9. Nice story and interesting names! Interesting how the rhinoceros helped them out.

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  10. The names were very interesting.

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  11. I liked the names of the characters!

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  12. I liked how descriptive this story was. Good story!

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  13. The names were really unique! :)

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  14. Funny names like Marty and Nigel! Good Story!

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  15. This story was was very entertaining.

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  16. This story was very interesting! Written well.

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  17. Click Click Boom! interesting story!

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  18. Wow...Nigel is not what everyone thought, eh? I'd watch out for him!
    It's not often I see the proper use of "there" and "their" in a sentence like, "There is their pack!" Good job!

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  19. Click Click! Awesome Name haha

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