Click, Click, Boom
Click Click Boom. Thats a pretty decent song, and this story is decent too! Love the ending, it made me laugh.
I liked the setting, good story
Interesting Characters. It was a reasonable story.
i liked you characters names< kept it interesting!
i liked then name click click boom
i liked your character names!
It's always the quiet ones that get ya.
The story was good and had great description throughout.
Nice story I really liked the names!
Nice story and interesting names! Interesting how the rhinoceros helped them out.
The names were very interesting.
I liked the characters and the setting!
I liked the names of the characters!
GREAT NAMES OF THE CHARACTERS
I liked how descriptive this story was. Good story!
The names were really unique! :)
Great story. Names were great!
Enjoyed reading this story!
That was truly an african safari
The ending was very suspenseful
Funny names like Marty and Nigel! Good Story!
This story was was very entertaining.
Very good, I liked the intensity
This story was very interesting! Written well.
Click Click Boom! interesting story!
Wow...Nigel is not what everyone thought, eh? I'd watch out for him!It's not often I see the proper use of "there" and "their" in a sentence like, "There is their pack!" Good job!
Loved the names!
Click Click! Awesome Name haha
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