The suspense pulled me in!
This should be the script for Taken 3.
It was very suspenseful and it kept me reading.
Suspense kept me reading!
It's a cool story. Definitely well-written. Lots of Panda Swag. (*ノ・ω・）(Sign of Panda approval)
Very good and very suspenseful!!
I liked the suspense (: Just double check punctuation. Other than that it was great!
Wooohoo..... Glad she didn't die. Good story! I agree.... this has to be the new script for Taken 3.
So, can you please make this a movie? Pronto?
Loved the plot line!
That was great! I loved how creative it was with all the different riddles.
I wanted to solve the riddles for myself in real life. I voted it most suspenseful.
Love this story! Happy ending!
Love the riddles and the happy ending!
Great Story! happy ending and very suspenseful
There is so much suspense in the story. The ending was really good too.
I love how well-thoughtout this story is and it's very cleaver and suspenseful!
This story was very intriguing to read. =D Just maybe check some of the punctuation and try to stay in the same tense. :)
I loved the suspense!
GOOD SUSPENSE :D
This needs to be made into a movie! I loved it, very suspenseful!!!!
i liked how suspenseful it was
Amazing job! I really loved how the story played out!
Very good plot! Make it a movie!
i really like your plot line very interesting!
This was an amazing story
Great plot and loved the riddles! It made me stop in the middle of reading and think! I think it might be one the best!
I like how the story played out. Very suspenseful!
Oh my god, loved it
love the plot!
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