Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Story #5: Piece By Piece

35 comments:

  1. This should be the script for Taken 3.

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  2. It was very suspenseful and it kept me reading.

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  3. It's a cool story. Definitely well-written. Lots of Panda Swag.
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  4. Very good and very suspenseful!!

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  5. I liked the suspense (: Just double check punctuation. Other than that it was great!

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  6. Wooohoo..... Glad she didn't die. Good story! I agree.... this has to be the new script for Taken 3.

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  7. So, can you please make this a movie? Pronto?

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  8. That was great! I loved how creative it was with all the different riddles.

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  9. I wanted to solve the riddles for myself in real life. I voted it most suspenseful.

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  10. Love the riddles and the happy ending!

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  11. Great Story! happy ending and very suspenseful

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  12. There is so much suspense in the story. The ending was really good too.

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  13. I love how well-thoughtout this story is and it's very cleaver and suspenseful!

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  14. This story was very intriguing to read. =D Just maybe check some of the punctuation and try to stay in the same tense. :)

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  15. This needs to be made into a movie! I loved it, very suspenseful!!!!

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  16. Amazing job! I really loved how the story played out!

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  17. i really like your plot line very interesting!

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  18. Great plot and loved the riddles! It made me stop in the middle of reading and think! I think it might be one the best!

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  19. I like how the story played out. Very suspenseful!

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