I really like the moral. It was a really god story :)
I love this story. It reminds me of my favorite movie "To Save A Life". This story is really great.
The moral is great
I like how different it is from all the other stories. Your story had a great message
Really good stories! It shows how there really are people out there supporting you!
The intro pulled me into reading the whole story. Loved the moral.
I'm glad he is finding his way.
I agree with steimle05! Also very well done.
Great story! I agree with 501MustRead!
I thought this was an incredible story. I like how it reaches out to people who are having rough time and let's them know that it's okay to ask for help.
I can definitely relate to David. I love this story because it's more then a story to me.
This is an amazing story and it has a great message to it.
Straight to the heart. I've thought about how what you do effects other people and this explains it perfectly. There are always going to be people out there wanting to help you and be your friend. You just have to find them! Great story!
This story is beautiful, i like how it makes seeking help not such a bad thing, and shows that it actually can change lives.
The moral of the story was great.
The story has a great message that inspird me!
This was a beautiful story! I love the moral at the end. I also thought the hook was great and it really pulled me in.
I liked the descriptive details.
The story had a good moral and very good details.
That story truly found its way
I loved this story! It had great meaning behind it and wonderful details.
i loved the moral of the story!
This story has a great moral! I really enjoyed reading it.
I really enjoyed reading this story!
Great moral, loved the story!
Very good story!!! The moral is very well expressed.
Great story, great moral!
This story was really touching and is relatable to some people.
this story has very good morals.
Really enjoyed reading the story
Such a great message for everyone! Touching story!
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