Thursday, October 23, 2014

Story #16: Forever

28 comments:

  1. This story was so sad, but really well written and put together I liked it a lot :)

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  2. It was very descriptive, good job.

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  3. It was a very well written story. I loved it!

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  4. This story gives a real Romeo and Juliet vibe. Loved it.

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  5. Great love story, sad, but great.

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  6. My favorite so far. Not gonna lie I teared up.

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  7. Your story was incredible. It was so sad and so sweet. The perfect tear jerker.

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  8. I really like your story! It was so sad, and very well written.

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  9. Saddest but cutest story ever! Made me cry!

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  10. Crying!! CRYINGGG!! OMG, I can't even. You just put Nicholas Sparks to shame!!

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  11. That story will truly last forever

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  12. That was adorable and beautiful! Made me tear up!

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  13. This was such a romantic story! Very well written!

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  14. Great story, it will last forever!

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  15. *Crying* :( SO MUCH LOVE!!

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  16. wow! that was really good!

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  17. I loved this story! It was sad but so cute and romantic ~

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  18. Sad but great story :D

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  19. Such an amazing story

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  20. This story was wonderful! Really hit me in the heart. Beautiful.

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  21. I was tearing up while reading this! It has a wonderful plot, loved it!

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  22. This was a beautiful story! So sad, but perfect.

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  23. The title makes has more meaning after reading this. Amazing story.

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  24. Very well written!

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  25. James Riverson was my favorite, good story!

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  26. Very well thought out. Good job!

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  27. amazing story sad ending though

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  28. Awwww...so sad and yet sweet. Love this story!

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