Thursday, October 23, 2014

Story #17: Four Friends and the Polar Bear

37 comments:

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  2. This is the best thing ever.
    This is better than my poem:
    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    I liked this story
    And you did too
    Don't lie,
    Chicken fry

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  3. I love twist of the polar bear driving a truck.

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  4. That polar bear came out of nowhere. I wouldn't go back without smores either!

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  5. Wowzers. That was different to say the least, however I really liked it. It was vey funny.

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  6. Very random, not a bad story.

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  7. Didn't expect it to end that way! Also third paragraph it says polar pear instead of polar bear

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  8. The way the story jumps to the next events so quickly, I just found it very funny and random.

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  9. That was extra creative, my friend.

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  10. Very interesting to say the least. Funny though

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  11. I loved, loved, loved, how short this one was. And it was super funny as well! :)

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  12. Short and to the point... HALLELUJAH!

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  13. Super random and super funny!

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  14. So many plot twists! Wonderful!

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  15. Funny and very interesting c:

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  16. Umm... It was out-there and good

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  17. Nice story! Way to twist it.

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  18. Polar Bears like smores!

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  19. I'm glad one of the friends got out of there alive!

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  20. The polar bear came out of no where! I'm never going in the woods without s'mores again!

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  21. Funny and creative story! Crazy polar bear!

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  22. Funny and very good! I'm never going into the woods ever again!

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  23. liked the story very funny

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  24. Very funny and creative! Great story!

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  25. Very funny! Nice plot twist.

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  26. i liked the thats how they roll part! very funny

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  27. Very funny story :D

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  28. I like polar bears cute story

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  29. There truly was four friends and a polar bear

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  30. That was an interesting story, very funny!

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  31. That was definitely an interesting story to say the least, lol. I liked the plot twist!

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  32. This was quite interesting!

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  33. Short too the point

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  34. Very funny. Nice work :)

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  35. Very funny! I enjoyed it!

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  36. Wow--a polar bear at a bonfire! Who would have thought?
    Very exciting!

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