Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Story #41: An Untitled Story of Titular Status; Harvest Moon, Dancing Panda Edition

19 comments:

  1. Wow! This reads like chapter one in a novel. (sci-fi? fantasy? suspense? all of the above?) I appreciate your subtle humor: "The bodyguards' duties had been burned out, much like their ambitions after being assigned to guard duty." And the dual perspectives--love that!
    So, I encourage you to keep writing...because you need to continue Lionel's view. Right??

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  2. I really liked this story it was well written and overall good :)

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  3. Very wow. Very suspense as to what happened to Lionel. Such long.
    *insert picture of shiba inu winking*

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  4. Much Wow! Well written! Crazy names

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  5. That story was truly untitled and had some titular status

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  6. Interesting plot and names. I enjoyed reading this.

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  7. Good story and good plot! Very suspenseful!

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  8. Geez! This story was written really well All in for a sequel??

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    1. ^^^^ I AGREE WITH CROSE!! SEQUEL, PLEASE! ^^^^

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  9. great story would definitely read it again

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  10. This was a great story! very interesting!

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  11. Good story! I got lost a few times but it was great!

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