Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Story #9: The Purge: Taking Power

36 comments:

  1. The story had a good moral and intense plot.

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  2. I liked the plot and it was well written.

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  3. I loved the ending and it had good description.

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  4. The plot was great! I liked how you showed a character's view through the purge apart from the movie.

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  5. Loved the story. Good advice at the end about the boss. :)

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  6. Very good! I could picture the whole story in my head!

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  7. It was pretty tight but it could of gone a page longer

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  8. Had to giggle at the end of it. Pretty funny ending. I enjoyed it!

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  9. pretty good story, could have been longer and said more

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  10. This was way better the the movie the Purge.

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  11. So his boss was a good guy after all...interesting. I was not expecting you to be saved at all. Nice twist.

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  12. I liked the twos, never expected it be a boss from a job. Good moral.

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  13. I think the story was pretty good overall. I liked how mentioned the boss giving you a thumbs up 👍

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  14. The ending was a cool twist and I liked the moral. :)

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  15. I loved the suspense! I did not expect the ending, I thought he was gonna die

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  16. I didn't expect that ending. It was really short, I liked it

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  17. Intense, next time add even more awesomeness!

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  18. Reminds me of something good story

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  19. I liked the twist with the horrible boss

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  20. The Moral though! It is the greatest moral of all time! It also had a great twist to go along with it!

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  21. One of my favorite stories so far! Good work.

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