Very nice loved the moral
Good Job. Nice plot.
The story had a good moral and intense plot.
i loved the ending it was very nice
I liked the plot and it was well written.
I loved the ending and it had good description.
The plot was great! I liked how you showed a character's view through the purge apart from the movie.
Loved the story. Good advice at the end about the boss. :)
Very good! I could picture the whole story in my head!
Great Story! Love the ending.
Nice plot! Love the concept.
It was pretty tight but it could of gone a page longer
Had to giggle at the end of it. Pretty funny ending. I enjoyed it!
pretty good story, could have been longer and said more
Lol liked the ending advice(:
This was way better the the movie the Purge.
Great plot very well written
So his boss was a good guy after all...interesting. I was not expecting you to be saved at all. Nice twist.
I liked the twos, never expected it be a boss from a job. Good moral.
The ending was a good surprise!
I think the story was pretty good overall. I liked how mentioned the boss giving you a thumbs up 👍
Short, but I thought the ending was funny. :D
The ending was a cool twist and I liked the moral. :)
That is really power taking
I loved the suspense! I did not expect the ending, I thought he was gonna die
I didn't expect that ending. It was really short, I liked it
Absolutely loved this story!
Intense, next time add even more awesomeness!
Loved the twist!
Reminds me of something good story
I liked the twist with the horrible boss
I love the plot to this story
The Moral though! It is the greatest moral of all time! It also had a great twist to go along with it!
One of my favorite stories so far! Good work.
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