Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Story #9: The Purge: Taking Power

36 comments:

  1. Very nice loved the moral

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  2. Good Job. Nice plot.

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  3. The story had a good moral and intense plot.

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  4. i loved the ending it was very nice

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  5. I liked the plot and it was well written.

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  6. I loved the ending and it had good description.

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  7. The plot was great! I liked how you showed a character's view through the purge apart from the movie.

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  8. Loved the story. Good advice at the end about the boss. :)

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  9. Very good! I could picture the whole story in my head!

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  10. Great Story! Love the ending.

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  11. Nice plot! Love the concept.

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  12. It was pretty tight but it could of gone a page longer

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  13. Had to giggle at the end of it. Pretty funny ending. I enjoyed it!

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  14. pretty good story, could have been longer and said more

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  15. Lol liked the ending advice(:

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  16. This was way better the the movie the Purge.

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  17. Great plot very well written

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  18. So his boss was a good guy after all...interesting. I was not expecting you to be saved at all. Nice twist.

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  19. I liked the twos, never expected it be a boss from a job. Good moral.

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  20. The ending was a good surprise!

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  21. I think the story was pretty good overall. I liked how mentioned the boss giving you a thumbs up 👍

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  22. Short, but I thought the ending was funny. :D

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  23. The ending was a cool twist and I liked the moral. :)

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  24. That is really power taking

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  25. I loved the suspense! I did not expect the ending, I thought he was gonna die

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  26. I didn't expect that ending. It was really short, I liked it

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  27. Absolutely loved this story!

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  28. Intense, next time add even more awesomeness!

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  29. Reminds me of something good story

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  30. I liked the twist with the horrible boss

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  31. I love the plot to this story

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  32. The Moral though! It is the greatest moral of all time! It also had a great twist to go along with it!

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  33. One of my favorite stories so far! Good work.

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