Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Story #11: Everyone Dies But Not Everyone Lives

31 comments:

  1. So many feels. Good story but so sad.

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  2. Very sad, but I loved it(: I loved the viewpoint as well

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  3. This story is absolutely amazing. It made my heart melt. Very well written.

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  4. Sad story but very well written and very good story.

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  5. Amazing, but also definitely sad. This memorable story shows that bad things of course happen but it's the strong people who stick it out.

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  6. I can verify that tears were shed while this story was read in class. Very sad. Tatum is an amazing kid!

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  7. You did a great job writing this story. I loved it, even if I did cry a little.

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  8. The author pulled me in at the introduction. Couldn't keep my eyes off it.

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  9. I absolutely loved this story! brought me to tears! 😭

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  10. Very well written.Very sad but I loved the plot and the story!

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  11. I think I'm gonna cry. Very moving.

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  12. Love this story! Very touching. Definitely a tear jerker.

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  13. The Saddest story by far! I loved it! One of the best written stories I've read.

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  14. The viewpoint was a very cool idea! Also very sad but very well written!

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  15. Such a good story! Well written! Brought me to tears

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  16. Very good story! It was really sad too

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  17. "I'll see from above who stole my soul mate" Best line. I love this story!

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  18. This was so sad, but I still liked it. Very moving!

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  19. Very good job at writing this story and it was so sad): but I enjoyed reading it!:)

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  20. Loved it, it was very well written but very sad!

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  21. Very good, emotional story. Great job!

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  22. Honestly made me cry! No one should have to go through something like that! :(

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  23. Very emotional yet very beautiful, touching story. Loved it!

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