Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Story #7: The Aracnaplane

32 comments:

  1. Holy cow.... that was freaky. Spiders are no my new fear on planes. Good Story tho! Its the perfect mixture of action and romance.

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  2. Nice cliffhanger idea there at the end. On Point

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  3. I really dig this story because I'm deathly afraid of spiders also! I liked the ending!!

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  4. That's a good story, the cliffhanger at the end was good(:

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  5. That took a wild unexpected turn but it was great and I like the ending

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  6. I really enjoyed your story. I thought the venomous spiders were the perfect addition to keep it intense. Also, the way you introduced the characters from the other's point of view was very clever.

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  7. I like the character chemistry between Jack and Sharon. I voted it Best Cliffhanger.

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  8. Loved the description of the characters and the suspense of the spiders ^-^

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  9. SOME MAKE THIS INTO A MOVIE NOW!

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  10. Wut!? Where is the rest of this story? You must write the sequel. Now. lol

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  11. Didn't expect that! I can relate to hating spiders definitely!

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  12. i thought that was very creative. But now i'm kind of afraid of spiders.

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  13. Great story. Really got my attention.

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  14. i really like the story line and suspense it had also i liked the romance between Jack and Sharon

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  15. I like this story! I felt all creeped out while reading it. I can't imagine what I would do in that situation

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  16. I loved this story! At the beginning I thought it was going to be a cute romance, but then it all changed just like that! Wonderful.

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  17. I liked the descriptive writing on the spiders. I didn't expect the story to get that crazy. Awesome job!

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  18. Epic story!!!! The creepiness was the best part!

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  19. I though it was funny how jack fell into sharons lap and the ending was pretty funny to.

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  20. Yikes, spiders. They don't bother me but that many. I don't know. The ending was perfect! Great cutoff!

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