Holy cow.... that was freaky. Spiders are no my new fear on planes. Good Story tho! Its the perfect mixture of action and romance.
Nice cliffhanger idea there at the end. On Point
I really dig this story because I'm deathly afraid of spiders also! I liked the ending!!
That's a good story, the cliffhanger at the end was good(:
That took a wild unexpected turn but it was great and I like the ending
I really enjoyed your story. I thought the venomous spiders were the perfect addition to keep it intense. Also, the way you introduced the characters from the other's point of view was very clever.
I like the character chemistry between Jack and Sharon. I voted it Best Cliffhanger.
Loved the description of the characters and the suspense of the spiders ^-^
SOME MAKE THIS INTO A MOVIE NOW!
Loved this story! Crazy ending!
Wut!? Where is the rest of this story? You must write the sequel. Now. lol
great ending! loved this story!
Didn't expect that! I can relate to hating spiders definitely!
Kind of like Snakes on a Plane! :D
This plot was creative!
The story was very creative!
i thought that was very creative. But now i'm kind of afraid of spiders.
The aracnaplane is amazing
Great story. Really got my attention.
i really like the story line and suspense it had also i liked the romance between Jack and Sharon
I like this story! I felt all creeped out while reading it. I can't imagine what I would do in that situation
I loved this story! At the beginning I thought it was going to be a cute romance, but then it all changed just like that! Wonderful.
I liked the descriptive writing on the spiders. I didn't expect the story to get that crazy. Awesome job!
Epic story!!!! The creepiness was the best part!
Nice story, awesome ending!
I though it was funny how jack fell into sharons lap and the ending was pretty funny to.
Great story, amazing ending too
Yikes, spiders. They don't bother me but that many. I don't know. The ending was perfect! Great cutoff!
Love the ending! Great suspense!
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