Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Story #40: Summer Break

22 comments:

  1. Wait, what!?

    That ending. Oh my word...

    Very sad.

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    1. You took the words right out of my mouth Mrs.O

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    2. I know, right? Crazy!

      Guess the moral of this story is to always listen to your mom, boys and girls!!! :)

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  2. It was a very well written story but very sad.

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  3. So sad, but it was a good story.

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  4. The ending was touching. Well written. I liked it

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  5. That was a tough lesson to learn in the ending. Good Story

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  6. It ended really sad. But I liked the way you started the story

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  7. Really good story! I can't believe the ending! so sad!

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  8. Really good story! Very well written and very descriptive!

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  9. Very sad ending but I loved the story. Had to stop in the middle to decide what I think was going to happen next!

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  10. Very sad ending to it but very well written.

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  11. Great story, but sad sad ending.

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  12. Very sad ending on in this story, but it is very good!

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  13. Great story. It's sad that they died. I bet Abby was getting into trouble when she got back.

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  14. What kind of ending is that? Freaaakyy!

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