Wait, what!? That ending. Oh my word...Very sad.
You took the words right out of my mouth Mrs.O
I know, right? Crazy!Guess the moral of this story is to always listen to your mom, boys and girls!!! :)
Very sad ending.
It was a very well written story but very sad.
Wow, the ending really got me
So sad, but it was a good story.
The ending was touching. Well written. I liked it
That was a tough lesson to learn in the ending. Good Story
That break was truly summer
It ended really sad. But I liked the way you started the story
Really good story! I can't believe the ending! so sad!
Really good story! Very well written and very descriptive!
Very sad ending but I loved the story. Had to stop in the middle to decide what I think was going to happen next!
Very sad ending to it but very well written.
Great story, but sad sad ending.
Very sad ending on in this story, but it is very good!
Great story. It's sad that they died. I bet Abby was getting into trouble when she got back.
What kind of ending is that? Freaaakyy!
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