Friday, October 24, 2014

Story #25: The Windy City Assassin

28 comments:

  1. someone obviously loves basketball. Very good story! Felt like I was really there

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  2. This almost makes me miss basketball Almost. Really descriptive, Great Story!
    #CRose #DRose

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  3. Not a big fan of Basketball, but good story. Loved the descriptive Introduction Paragraph.

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  4. Love this story. I love Chicago and like the bulls

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  5. wow! i really enjoyed reading this!

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  6. Not what I thought it would be but it's still a good story

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  7. Great story with great description. I love how you brought the intensity of competition to life.

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  8. Really good basketball story almost makes me miss basketball.
    #HBone #DRose

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  9. I don't even watch basketball, but this story kept me intrigued!

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  10. This was a very interesting story. Well written and descriptive.

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  12. I'm not that into sports, but this one really kept me reading!

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  13. Good job, not usually into sports but this was really well-written!

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  14. Well written! This one kept me reading

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  15. Well written story! Like redvines19 said, I don't watch basketball but i enjoyed this story.

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  16. Nice. That he was truly a windy city assassin

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  17. Wow, that actually made it seem like I was there watching

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  18. Makes me excited for basketball! I love the bulls! Good story!

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  19. i really enjoyed reading this story! it was very well written!!

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  20. D Rose! It's amazing! Great story. Well written!

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  21. Awesome description. This story was overall amazing.

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  22. I don't know who Derrick Rose is and I don't follow the NBA, but I really liked the suspense and excitement of the story. It definitely shows the benefits of hard work and determination!

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  23. Well written, kept my attention!

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  24. Basketball is truly the greatest sport of all time and Derrick Rose is a huge inspiration to any player out there! Great Story and its about time we get another title in Chicago! ;)

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