I really liked the ending and it was a great story :)
Amazing story I got lost in it.
.."and they lived happily ever after." Grade A, nice job
I like the all caps dialogue. I yelled through it in my head. Good story concept.
Nice story! Great ending
The voice in my head has never yelled so much reading a story!
Good story, it was well written and had just enough humor.
Good story. I liked how it was written.
I agree with GretchenWeiners, the voice in my head yelled the whole time! It is still yelling while I am typing! That is why I'm using exclamation points! lol
Well that happened. Nice story.
Honda Oddysey = Swegger Wegun
That snowstorm was truly great
Good story with some funny humor!
that was a good story
Probably the best story I have ever read. ;)
Good story, very exciting!
Jack should have dumped Susan. She is just plain mean. I can totally hear an old couple arguing like this, though...Very funny, in fact, I can't stop laughing at your obvious side notes and details (he wipes his eyes with a tissue (they have tissues in the car)). LOL
Kept me reading! Well written! My head hurts form all the screaming in there.
Loved the story!
Very good story!
good story kept me reading
I thought Jack was going to be dead! I like your dialogue forms.~
Love this story, super funny
Great story! Poor guy! He got mauled.
i liked the happy ending
I've never seen anyone so excited to go to Canada! lol
Great story! Really enjoyed it and loved their last name!
Loved this story! It was one of the best that I've read!
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