Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Story #36: The Great Snowstorm

32 comments:

  1. I really liked the ending and it was a great story :)

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  2. .."and they lived happily ever after." Grade A, nice job

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  3. I like the all caps dialogue. I yelled through it in my head. Good story concept.

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  4. The voice in my head has never yelled so much reading a story!

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  5. Good story, it was well written and had just enough humor.

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  6. Good story. I liked how it was written.

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  7. I agree with GretchenWeiners, the voice in my head yelled the whole time! It is still yelling while I am typing! That is why I'm using exclamation points! lol

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  8. Good story with some funny humor!

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  9. Probably the best story I have ever read. ;)

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  10. Jack should have dumped Susan. She is just plain mean.
    I can totally hear an old couple arguing like this, though...
    Very funny, in fact, I can't stop laughing at your obvious side notes and details (he wipes his eyes with a tissue (they have tissues in the car)). LOL

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  11. Kept me reading! Well written! My head hurts form all the screaming in there.

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  12. I thought Jack was going to be dead! I like your dialogue forms.~

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  13. I've never seen anyone so excited to go to Canada! lol

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  14. Great story! Really enjoyed it and loved their last name!

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  15. Loved this story! It was one of the best that I've read!

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