Friday, October 24, 2014

Story #23: Jyne Raquet

35 comments:

  1. I laughed a little. Loved the Key and Peele reference.

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  2. Hahaha. Poor June Raquet. Good story tho! It made me laugh a lot

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  3. What did I just read...
    Interesting conflict

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  4. Haha! Love This Story! Very funny!

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  5. I liked this story it was good and very original names

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  6. A strange one that's for sure. Love the last thing the uncle said.

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  7. This story was great. Very Funny.

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  8. This was by far, the most interesting story I have read, yet.

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  9. Funny and entertaining. Ending was hilarious!

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  10. Really funny story, the main character sounds like a great guy! Probably even better than Derek Schiller.

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  11. Lol! this Story was so funny! I wonder how funny it would be to see someone fall over from their ears! Haha

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  12. Oh, poor Jyne. His uncle Derek Schiller can be really mean! ;)

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  13. Loved the funny ending! Short and simple :)

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  14. I laughed my butt off at this story. The last sentence was histarical.

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