Friday, October 24, 2014

Story #23: Jyne Raquet

35 comments:

  1. Lol the uncle is such a troll.

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  2. This story was really funny :)

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  4. I laughed a little. Loved the Key and Peele reference.

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  5. Hahaha. Poor June Raquet. Good story tho! It made me laugh a lot

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  7. What did I just read...
    Interesting conflict

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  8. Haha! Love This Story! Very funny!

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  9. I liked this story it was good and very original names

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  10. A strange one that's for sure. Love the last thing the uncle said.

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  11. This story was great. Very Funny.

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  12. This made me laugh!

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  13. What a funny story!

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  14. This was by far, the most interesting story I have read, yet.

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  15. Funny and entertaining. Ending was hilarious!

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  16. Really funny story, the main character sounds like a great guy! Probably even better than Derek Schiller.

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  17. Very funny story! Awesome job.

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  18. This story was so funny!

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  19. Such a funny story. great ending

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  20. That was truly Jyne Raquet

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  21. This is a funny story

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  22. Lol! this Story was so funny! I wonder how funny it would be to see someone fall over from their ears! Haha

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  23. Hilarious! Great work.

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  24. Loved the story, hilarious!

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  25. This story makes me lol.

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  26. Funniest ending ever! Loved it!

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  27. Oh, poor Jyne. His uncle Derek Schiller can be really mean! ;)

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  28. Loved the funny ending! Short and simple :)

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  29. Kind of odd but funny!

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  30. Jyne's Idea was hilarious!

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  31. I laughed my butt off at this story. The last sentence was histarical.

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