Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Story #42: Missing (2)

22 comments:

  1. I'm never going to a haunted house. Ever. Never ever.
    That tray of rusty tools. I just don't even want to know.
    Well written story.

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  2. Officially scared to go haunted housing ever again.

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  3. That was really good! Haunted Housing is more dangerous than I thought. It had me spooked.

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  4. Great story! I wasn't scared of haunted housing before, but now I am!

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  5. That was awesome. Love how you foreshadow with the news report and then use the report to end the story.

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  6. Very Ironic! Makes me not want to go to a haunted house anymore!

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  7. Very well written. I liked how descriptive this story was.

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  8. "Death bed" already scares me enough. Such a well written story. Great visuals.

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  9. Very, very well written but I will never go to a haunted house ever in my life.

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  10. I don't think I want to go to that "haunted house"

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  11. EEEEPPPS That was some freaky stuff, author person. Very freaky. I guess it was pretty well written... :)
    #SoFetch

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  12. FREEEAAAKKKY! Well written. Definitely scary

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  13. Creepy story but well written!

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  14. Ohmygosh. That was really creepy! I loved your story though!~

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  15. WOW! I just wanted it to keep going! Very good story.

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  16. Very well written! Reasons why I don't like haunted houses though..

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  17. Great job! I hate haunted house. One more reasons to not go. It sucks that they died.

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