I'm never going to a haunted house. Ever. Never ever. That tray of rusty tools. I just don't even want to know. Well written story.
Well that escalated quickly.
That was pretty scary
Officially scared to go haunted housing ever again.
That was really good! Haunted Housing is more dangerous than I thought. It had me spooked.
That was truly missing
Great story! I wasn't scared of haunted housing before, but now I am!
That was awesome. Love how you foreshadow with the news report and then use the report to end the story.
Very Ironic! Makes me not want to go to a haunted house anymore!
Very well written. I liked how descriptive this story was.
"Death bed" already scares me enough. Such a well written story. Great visuals.
Very, very well written but I will never go to a haunted house ever in my life.
I don't think I want to go to that "haunted house"
EEEEPPPS That was some freaky stuff, author person. Very freaky. I guess it was pretty well written... :)#SoFetch
FREEEAAAKKKY! Well written. Definitely scary
Creepy story but well written!
Well that escalated
Ohmygosh. That was really creepy! I loved your story though!~
WOW! I just wanted it to keep going! Very good story.
Very well written! Reasons why I don't like haunted houses though..
Great job! I hate haunted house. One more reasons to not go. It sucks that they died.
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