This story is very sad, I almost couldn't get myself to read it. Its a good tear jerker.
Wow! I agree with CourtSport98, tear jerker
I like how this seemed like something that actually happened to you.
I agree with CRose and CourtSport98 it was definitely a tear jerker
Very sad, but showed the characters well. I will remember this one
Tear Jerker for sure. Nice story
Sad story, but very nice!
Very Good! Definitely will remember this one.
Really good but also really sad I really liked it!!
It was great. It showed how in life you have to live with your mistakes and sometimes there is no easy way out of owning up to it.
That took a quick turn of events. Saddest overall.
I liked how you described the characters and expressed how much it affected everyone.
THE FEELS! WHY IS THIS STORY SO SAD! :'(
Very good tear jerker!
Hard to treat it like a short story when it sounds so close to a real story. :(
But, it is very sad, and the emotions do come through in your writing.
Very sad. I agree a tear jerker. Well written over all
Very well-written and very sad! :(
That boy is truly unforgettable
Very good and sad!
Good, But sad
The characters seem so real! Great Story!
Very touching story! I can tell something must have happened to you to inspire this story
The intro made me want to keep reading. Good job!
I agree with everyone, Tear jerker for sure.
Very quick turn of events but it was very good yet sad.
I liked how quick the events turned
Sad story, but very good!
it was well written but very sad!
Very sad but very good
Great story but it is very sad
Very unforgettable. Great story, and it is very sad.
Was this based off the boy in Rock Island I think it was. Still a good story if it wasn't
so sad ):
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