Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Story #6: The Most Unforgettable Boy

35 comments:

  1. This story is very sad, I almost couldn't get myself to read it. Its a good tear jerker.

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  2. Wow! I agree with CourtSport98, tear jerker

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  3. I like how this seemed like something that actually happened to you.

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  4. I agree with CRose and CourtSport98 it was definitely a tear jerker

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  5. Very sad, but showed the characters well. I will remember this one

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  6. Very Good! Definitely will remember this one.

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  7. Really good but also really sad I really liked it!!

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  8. It was great. It showed how in life you have to live with your mistakes and sometimes there is no easy way out of owning up to it.

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  9. That took a quick turn of events. Saddest overall.

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  10. I liked how you described the characters and expressed how much it affected everyone.

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  11. THE FEELS! WHY IS THIS STORY SO SAD! :'(

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  12. Hard to treat it like a short story when it sounds so close to a real story. :(

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    1. But, it is very sad, and the emotions do come through in your writing.

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  13. Very sad. I agree a tear jerker. Well written over all

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  14. Very well-written and very sad! :(

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  15. Very touching story! I can tell something must have happened to you to inspire this story

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  16. The intro made me want to keep reading. Good job!

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  17. I agree with everyone, Tear jerker for sure.

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  18. Very quick turn of events but it was very good yet sad.

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  19. I liked how quick the events turned

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  20. Very unforgettable. Great story, and it is very sad.

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  21. Was this based off the boy in Rock Island I think it was. Still a good story if it wasn't

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