Friday, October 24, 2014

Story #22: The Breaking Point

30 comments:

  1. Well-written! It really took a turn for the worst, but I liked the resolution at the end.

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  2. This is the best story yet! Really went through the worst thing out there and god knew you could battle through it! Very very good story!

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  3. This story kept me reading. So sad but very well written.

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  4. Wow. This was an incredible story. Very intense.

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  5. This story must have been hard to write. Im pretty sure that while I was reading it I started hyperventilating. Very suspenseful and well-writtten!

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  6. wow! that was really good it kept me entertained the whole time!

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  7. I'm speechless. This was such a great story. I loved the suspense!

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  8. "God gives his toughest battles to his strongest soldiers." This quote should be in a movie or something like that. Amazing story.

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  9. Very well-written! Kept me entertained and wanting to read more and more!

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  10. Very well written, had a nice moral at the end.

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  11. Very good story!! it really kept me reading!

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  12. Loved the moral at the end! Great story.

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  13. Well written! That was a terrible (but well written) plot twist in there!

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  14. Very well written, loved the suspense!

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  15. The author already knows how I feel about this story, but I think it's important to share because this happens to girls more often than our society would care to admit or deal with.

    Every girl should know that no matter what, it is NOT your fault. It is NEVER your fault.
    Never feel guilt or shame. You did nothing wrong. Those that should feel guilty are the ones who sexually assault our young women. Ignore those who call you names or try to make you feel less of a person. You are not broken, nor are you defined by this one awful event. You will move on as a stronger, better person.

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  16. Such a great story. We never think it could be us. So sad that it actually happens in this world. Great story. Kept me reading!

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  17. Good Story! I was really into it!

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  18. Great story, the suspense about killed me!

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  19. That is a good title. It fits quite well. Good job!

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  20. the suspense was killing me but great story

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  21. Amazing story. It's a story everyone should read and realize it actually happens in the world. Well-written.

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  22. Best story ever! I am in love with this story!

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  23. Very well written, well told. Overall amazing story. So glad you wrote this.

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  24. I liked the description of the dirty boots leaving mud everywhere! :)

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