Monday, October 27, 2014

Story #35: A Sister As a Mother

33 comments:

  1. I thought the ending was great, how a horrible situation became an inspiring one

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  2. Amazing story the ending was so good.

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  3. I'm glad they ended up happy! It was a very nice story!

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  4. Home life was explained well, and was kept throughout the whole story. Although it was sad, I enjoyed the ending.

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  5. Sad. The title fit well with the story

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  6. Sad story, but the ending fits it perfectly. Great Job.

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  7. Very good description. I liked the ending

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  8. I really liked the ending. I liked how they both got a fresh start. Awesome story.

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  9. Makes you realize to be grateful for everything you have!

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  10. I loved this story! I felt that I could almost relate to the characters. :)

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  11. I loved the story! I wonder how the rest of their lives go...

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  12. Great story and loved the ending!

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  13. Im glad they got a nice home in the end

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  14. Aww, I love stories like these. Happy endings make me happy. :)

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  15. Love how they both are in a safe home now!

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  16. Wonderful ending! Very well-written.

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  17. such a cute story! And a great happy ending!

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  18. Perfect ending! Poor girls. No one should ever be treated like that.

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  19. The part where Julia ran away and couldn't be found was tough to read because of having a little sister, but I really like the story and the ending!

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