This was a fantastic story. I like how the main character overcame his mistake the previous year and the way that the author used that to end the story.
I don't know baseball, but a state champs sounds good no matter what, great story
This was a great story. I'm glad Dale's team won.
This was a really good story I'm glad he knew how to overcome his mistakes and win!!
Great story.~ Happy that Dale overcame his challenges so his t team won.
I like the author's form of writing. Good sports story.
I really liked the whole story! It was very descriptive and easy to follow!
Great sports story!
loved that it was about baseball!!
I bet Dale's dad was pretty ticked about him giving up a walk-off home run the previous year. Good thing he redeemed himself, huh!? ;) Seriously, though, that would be pretty nice to strike out the state's best hitter on a change-up. Good story.
Loved the story- m=never stopped reading and I don't even like baseball!
Great story even though I was the one who hit the walk off home run
That truly was the 54th out
Very good story! It shows even if you let a home run or something go you can over come that and come back to win!
Go Dale!! Go Dale. Woot woot. Good story
Loved this story so much!
I wonder who Dale Norman is.. hmmm... Great story!! Even though I don't understand Baseball very well x)
Great story "Dale" -_- lol Great job.
Great story Dale!
good story I liked the ending
This was a really good story! I loved it. The names sounded pretty familiar!
Great story! I love myself a good baseball story! It was great!
Im glad dales team won.
Dale is Awesome, So glad that he got that final out this time! :)
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