Saturday, October 25, 2014

Story #30: A Secret Society

29 comments:

  1. I can honestly say that this story was incredible and possibly one of my favorites. It's terribly sad and you tell how passionate the author is. You should be proud of writing such a great story.

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  2. This was a tearjerker. This was such a good story. Very well written! Awesome job!

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  3. This was an amazing story and was very well written!! Good job!

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  4. An Amazing Story very inspiring.

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  5. Great story. Very sad but I loved the emotion that was put into it~ c:

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  6. The author had me at the introduction. I truly was hooked to this story. Well done!

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  7. A very intriguing story! The characters were so full of personality!

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  8. Brought tears to my eyes.
    Your intense description and use of similes is astounding. Some of my favorites: "burn out like a cheap candle from IKEA," "a traffic cone at a rave," "bright headlights creating jagged lines in the sky," and "the pain was white hot..." Very well written!

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  9. Such a good story with great visuals.

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  10. that was an amazing story! i think you might've even inspired me to start running! :)

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  11. Very good story! I loved "Burn out like a cheap candle from IKEA!" made me laugh!

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  12. Best over all story by far! Every word left me wanting more. Great description and so much passion.

    (Friends re-runs are my favorite!)

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  13. There is a quote that would have gone well with this story. "Run every race with a suicide pace, because today is a good day to die." Cus.... the girl kinda died while running. ANYWAYS, Great Story, I'm going to go home and run now (:

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  14. Great story! It was funny, yet it was inspirational.

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  15. Oh my gosh! This was, by far, the best story I have read, yet! I was not expecting that outcome (for her to die), but it made the story so much more intense! Wonderful job!

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  16. I loved the story! Very well written!

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  17. Amazing story. Very inspirational. Loved it!

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  18. Amazing story! Running is fun when you're in shape! Not when you're not! Loved it! Very inspiring!

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  19. Running and Friends Re-Runs? Definitely don't know who wrote this amazing story! Great Job loved every minute I spent reading ! (:

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  20. Absolutely loved it! One of my favorites. Very well written.

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  21. Well written story, i loved it.

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  22. Like a Cheap Candle from Ikea! Hahaha too funny :) Good story!

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