Loved the ending it was a great story :)
I love the ending, I didn't see it coming. Great Plot!
Aw, I loved how you tied things together in the end.
This story tugged my heart strings. Glad Blake was found.
Great Story! Loved the happy ending!
Your story was incredible. I love how, while it's sad that she has to step up to the plate as a parental figure, she does it so well. I also, love the slight plot twist about their father. All around great story.
I want a sequel!
Loved the ending! Keep writing like this!
Great Story! I really liked how no part of the story went too fast, it was very well planned out!
Great Story. Really loved how it was written and the ending
this needs to be a movie it's that good of a story
This story warmed my heart!
Great story, thank god for Ghost Dad.
Amazing! I'm still thinking about the ending! I loved it!
The story's ending was so great. It was a touching story!
Okay, it is official. You need to write another story that leads off of this one!!
Great story I got kind of scared because I thought Blake died
I loved the end! Was curious about what actually happened with their dad.~
He was truly missing.
i loved the ending defiantly did not expect that!
Absolutely incredible story! Very well written!
Sad, and happy. Great story, very well written.
Loved the plot twist about the dad!
This story was very solid. Well written. Good job!
This is such an amazing story
I loved how at the end the dad had spoken to Blake! It was very mysterious.
It was a great end to the upsetting story in the beginning! Touching
well written good story
I really liked the dialogue!
I kept thinking, "It's a trap!" Great suspense and very well written!
Loved the part about her dad and the ending!
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