Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Story #14: Missing (1)

35 comments:

  1. Loved the ending it was a great story :)

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  2. I love the ending, I didn't see it coming. Great Plot!

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  3. Aw, I loved how you tied things together in the end.

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  4. This story tugged my heart strings. Glad Blake was found.

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  5. Great Story! Loved the happy ending!

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  6. Your story was incredible. I love how, while it's sad that she has to step up to the plate as a parental figure, she does it so well. I also, love the slight plot twist about their father. All around great story.

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  7. Loved the ending! Keep writing like this!

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  8. Great Story! I really liked how no part of the story went too fast, it was very well planned out!

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  9. Great Story. Really loved how it was written and the ending

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  10. this needs to be a movie it's that good of a story

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  11. Great story, thank god for Ghost Dad.

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  12. Amazing! I'm still thinking about the ending! I loved it!

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  13. The story's ending was so great. It was a touching story!

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  14. Okay, it is official. You need to write another story that leads off of this one!!

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  15. Great story I got kind of scared because I thought Blake died

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  16. I loved the end! Was curious about what actually happened with their dad.~

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  17. i loved the ending defiantly did not expect that!

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  18. Absolutely incredible story! Very well written!

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  19. Sad, and happy. Great story, very well written.

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  20. This story was very solid. Well written. Good job!

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  21. I loved how at the end the dad had spoken to Blake! It was very mysterious.

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  22. It was a great end to the upsetting story in the beginning! Touching

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  23. I kept thinking, "It's a trap!"

    Great suspense and very well written!

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  24. Loved the part about her dad and the ending!

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  26. 2spooky4me! You know nothing, John Snow!

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