Amazing Story really creative
This story is really well written and has some very good points.
Amen, sister (or brother??). Great Story, good moral.
That was truly the stand up
Has good points on to stand up for yourself and not let people push you around!
Alway believe in and RESPECT yourself. I feel like this story could have been longer and had more of a climax, but I like that Serenity chose to speak out and that her true friends stood up for her.
Loved the ending!
I want more. That was such a good short story.
Short, sweet, to-the-point moral. I like it.
Loved how it was short and to the point
I really liked it and the moral was great :)
Good points on standing up for yourself. Nice physical description of Serenity in the beginning~.
Love how story teaches respect for yourself, and to have confidence!
Great moral! It could've been a little longer, but I still really liked it.
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I liked how she didn't react violently
Good lesson in the story.
Good moral. I liked how her friends stood up for her.
Nice moral. It's great to have friends who are there for you
Great moral. Loved the story.
Great story, good moral
Great Story! I loved the moral! It doesn't matter what people think of you, you should be yourself!
This story had a great moral. Good job!
great story liked the moral of the story
Good story. Had a good moral. Short and to the point.
I liked the Idea to the story.
Great moral of the story!
Great lesson in the story!
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