Friday, October 24, 2014

Story #26: The Stand Up

31 comments:

  1. Amazing Story really creative

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  2. This story is really well written and has some very good points.

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  3. Amen, sister (or brother??). Great Story, good moral.

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  4. That was truly the stand up

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  5. Has good points on to stand up for yourself and not let people push you around!

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  6. Alway believe in and RESPECT yourself. I feel like this story could have been longer and had more of a climax, but I like that Serenity chose to speak out and that her true friends stood up for her.

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  7. Loved the ending!

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  8. I want more. That was such a good short story.

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  9. Short, sweet, to-the-point moral. I like it.

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  10. Loved how it was short and to the point

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  11. I really liked it and the moral was great :)

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  12. Good points on standing up for yourself. Nice physical description of Serenity in the beginning~.

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  13. Love how story teaches respect for yourself, and to have confidence!

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  14. Great moral! It could've been a little longer, but I still really liked it.

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  16. I liked how she didn't react violently

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  17. Good lesson in the story.

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  18. Good moral. I liked how her friends stood up for her.

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  19. Very motivational!

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  20. Nice moral. It's great to have friends who are there for you

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  21. Great moral. Loved the story.

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  22. Great story, good moral

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  23. Great Story! I loved the moral! It doesn't matter what people think of you, you should be yourself!

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  24. This story had a great moral. Good job!

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  25. great story liked the moral of the story

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  26. Good story. Had a good moral. Short and to the point.

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  27. I liked the Idea to the story.

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  28. Great moral of the story!

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  29. Great lesson in the story!

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