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What happened to warm fuzzies, Ladennifer?? Please revise your comment so it is more constructive/helpful rather than just negative. Thank you!
I liked the nonphysical description of New York~!
I liked the positivity at the end of the story. :)
I like the way it was written and the description of the main character's feelings!
The part when she said drab made me smile
Short and sweet. Loved it.
How she told her to smile! Loved it
I like the description of new york, it was a good story!
I liked how it described life in New York.
I liked that is was short.
liked that it was short and was a few spelling errors< but described New York well.
Nice description of New York. Sweet ending.
I like how it talks about the real life struggle of choosing your career after HS.
You described New York well, and your story really relates to life.
I like how it tells about the real life struggle of picking your career after high school.
Good story! I liked the description of New York.
This story made me happy that I go to a small school...Nice Perspective!
I like the description about the school.
Very good description!
I feel a sequel brewing... What does Anna do on her break? Feed the pigeons in Central Park? Catch a runway show during Fashion Week? Find a stray dog and keep him? Travel to Dallas and catch Ebola? I want to hear more. :)
"Travel to Dallas and catch Ebola?" This is why I love Mrs. Orman 😂 && I liked the personality of the main character!
I liked that it was short and to the point
I like how short it was
The story was short and simple :D
Cool Story, The description of New York was my favorite part!
i liked the ending it was very nice
"She was like, 'Anna you look so drab'" Best part of the story.
GOOD STORY :) :D :P
I liked how it talked about life in N.Y.
Shows the real side to a life in the city.
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