Monday, October 20, 2014

Story #1: New York, School, and Spring Break

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    1. What happened to warm fuzzies, Ladennifer?? Please revise your comment so it is more constructive/helpful rather than just negative. Thank you!

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  2. I liked the nonphysical description of New York~!

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  3. I liked the positivity at the end of the story. :)

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  4. I like the way it was written and the description of the main character's feelings!

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  5. The part when she said drab made me smile

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  6. Short and sweet. Loved it.

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  7. How she told her to smile! Loved it

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  8. I like the description of new york, it was a good story!

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  9. I liked how it described life in New York.

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  10. I liked that is was short.

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  11. liked that it was short and was a few spelling errors< but described New York well.

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  12. Nice description of New York. Sweet ending.

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  13. I like how it talks about the real life struggle of choosing your career after HS.

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  14. You described New York well, and your story really relates to life.

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  15. I like how it tells about the real life struggle of picking your career after high school.

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  16. Good story! I liked the description of New York.

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  17. This story made me happy that I go to a small school...Nice Perspective!

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  18. I like the description about the school.

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  19. Very good description!

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  20. I feel a sequel brewing... What does Anna do on her break? Feed the pigeons in Central Park? Catch a runway show during Fashion Week? Find a stray dog and keep him? Travel to Dallas and catch Ebola? I want to hear more. :)

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  21. "Travel to Dallas and catch Ebola?" This is why I love Mrs. Orman 😂 && I liked the personality of the main character!

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  22. I liked that it was short and to the point

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  23. I like how short it was

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  24. The story was short and simple :D

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  25. Cool Story, The description of New York was my favorite part!

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  26. i liked the ending it was very nice

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  27. "She was like, 'Anna you look so drab'" Best part of the story.

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  28. GOOD STORY :) :D :P

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  29. I liked how it talked about life in N.Y.

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  30. Shows the real side to a life in the city.

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