Saturday, October 25, 2014

Story #28: The Football Tragedy

34 comments:

  1. A really good story. You did a great job at making Leo seem like we was well liked and full of life.

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  2. Great story! It was really sad, though.

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  3. Well written, really tragic, good story

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  4. Really sad, but still a great story.

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  5. It's really sad, but over all it was a good story

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  6. Such a sad ending. It's ironic, the story and the events that recently happened. :(

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  7. This is a very sad story. Very well written.

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  8. Tragic, but loved the description of Leo, and how important you made him seem.

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  9. Descriptive with a good moral. Loved the character of Leo. :)

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  10. I loved the story, it was very sad, and very well written!

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  11. Well written and very sad.

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  12. i loved the story! very well written!

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  13. A tragedy, indeed. :( You captured the emotions of the teenagers so well. The ending is a nice, bittersweet reminder that life does go on and things do get better. A message that is especially important now.

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  14. Well written, but sad story. So scary that something like that could happen to one of our boys.

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  15. Great story and it sad that he died

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  16. Very good message with the story showing something like what were all going through right now!

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  17. That was truly a football tragedy

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  18. That truly was a football tragedy

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  19. It's so sad! But that also makes for an amazing story! :)

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  20. This made me cry. Good story, it really is heart touching.

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  21. Great story! Very touching.

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  22. This is very touching and makes my scared to go to football games!!

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  23. Very sad. Good job though!

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  24. Great story but very sad

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  25. Very well written! I loved that heart touching feeling!

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  26. Enjoyed reading it, sad sad sad..

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  27. Very sad but well written

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  28. sad story but a good ending.

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  29. Amazing story, so tragic. But I still loved this because it captured my attention. Bittersweet ending.

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  30. Very touching yet sad. Loved how they said everyone has to move on but with him in their memory.

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  31. Great story! It was very sad. Poor Leo.

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  32. Sad, but great story!

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  33. Sports Stories are always my favorite! This one went outside of the box and was sad and good at the same time.

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