A really good story. You did a great job at making Leo seem like we was well liked and full of life.
Great story! It was really sad, though.
Well written, really tragic, good story
Really sad, but still a great story.
It's really sad, but over all it was a good story
Such a sad ending. It's ironic, the story and the events that recently happened. :(
This is a very sad story. Very well written.
Tragic, but loved the description of Leo, and how important you made him seem.
Descriptive with a good moral. Loved the character of Leo. :)
I loved the story, it was very sad, and very well written!
Well written and very sad.
i loved the story! very well written!
A tragedy, indeed. :( You captured the emotions of the teenagers so well. The ending is a nice, bittersweet reminder that life does go on and things do get better. A message that is especially important now.
Well written, but sad story. So scary that something like that could happen to one of our boys.
Great story and it sad that he died
Very good story!
Very good message with the story showing something like what were all going through right now!
That was truly a football tragedy
That truly was a football tragedy
It's so sad! But that also makes for an amazing story! :)
This made me cry. Good story, it really is heart touching.
Great story! Very touching.
This is very touching and makes my scared to go to football games!!
Very sad. Good job though!
Great story but very sad
Very well written! I loved that heart touching feeling!
Enjoyed reading it, sad sad sad..
Very sad but well written
sad story but a good ending.
Amazing story, so tragic. But I still loved this because it captured my attention. Bittersweet ending.
Very touching yet sad. Loved how they said everyone has to move on but with him in their memory.
Great story! It was very sad. Poor Leo.
Sad, but great story!
Sports Stories are always my favorite! This one went outside of the box and was sad and good at the same time.
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