Woah that was pretty intense, but overall it was a well written
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Wow!! Plot twist, the mother is the KILLER! Good story
SPOILER ALERT Thanks CourtSport...
This was a fabulous story, even if the end was spoiled by a spoiler child
"Spoiler child"
YOU KNOW YOU'RE JUST JEALOUS!! Just because u didn't get to be a spoiler child doesn't mean you have to take it out on me! LOLOL. #GetOnMyLevel
I absolutely loved the plot twist! Great story! :)
I read the comments before I read the story. Spoilers! It was a well written story, and I was truly attached in reading it.
Well written.
WHAT THE NAME OF STEPHEN KING DID I JUST READ?! Good story, by the way.
Quite the plot twist. Good and well written story.
Great plot twist! (Even though I knew what was going to happen) lol
What a twist.
Wowzers. I really liked this story. The plot was fantastic and it was REALLY well written.
I knew it when she offered to make supper! Very well written
As soon as the mom said she was going to make the meal, I knew something was up lol.
That was truly a labor day weekend
The whole time I was thinking don't eat the food and what does he do he ate the food. :P
I just realized I didn't actually comment on the story itself. Very well written; love the foreshadowing!
Major plot twist! I can't believe a mother would do that! Crazy!
HOLY COW WHAT THE HECK.... IM SPEECHLESS. Even knowing the spoiler before reading the story still makes it interesting.
I didn't read the comments before reading the story! so HA. What a crazy twist!!
Wow..... didn't see that coming ;)
Did not see that one coming!
The ending was crazy! I couldn't believe it was the mother?
holy plot twist!
What the plot twist!
very well written and good plot twist
Whoa that plot twist! Great story~
Very good loved the plot!
I saw that coming. And i'm not happy about the husbands death! What a terrible mother! But good plot..
Love the plot twist
Poor guys! I knew that was going to happen! Great story.
great story
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Woah that was pretty intense, but overall it was a well written
ReplyDelete******DO NOT READ ANY FURTHER IF YOU HAVE NOT READ THE STORY!****
DeleteHUGE SPOILER BELOW.
DON'T LOOK!
I SAID DON'T LOOK!
Now you're going to look, aren't you?
( \_/ )
( o.o)
(___)0
/00\
>
~
Eyes back up...nothing to see down here.
Read the story and you can return...
DeleteMy little pictures didn't turn out like I planned. Oops. The first was a cute little bunny rabbit.
The next was a guy giving you the sour ~ face look.
Now you have to scroll back up to see them again, don't ya? ;)
Wow!! Plot twist, the mother is the KILLER! Good story
ReplyDeleteSPOILER ALERT Thanks CourtSport...
DeleteThis was a fabulous story, even if the end was spoiled by a spoiler child
Delete"Spoiler child"
DeleteYOU KNOW YOU'RE JUST JEALOUS!! Just because u didn't get to be a spoiler child doesn't mean you have to take it out on me! LOLOL. #GetOnMyLevel
DeleteI absolutely loved the plot twist! Great story! :)
ReplyDeleteI read the comments before I read the story. Spoilers! It was a well written story, and I was truly attached in reading it.
ReplyDeleteWell written.
ReplyDeleteWHAT THE NAME OF STEPHEN KING DID I JUST READ?! Good story, by the way.
ReplyDeleteQuite the plot twist. Good and well written story.
ReplyDeleteGreat plot twist! (Even though I knew what was going to happen) lol
ReplyDeleteWhat a twist.
ReplyDeleteWowzers. I really liked this story. The plot was fantastic and it was REALLY well written.
ReplyDeleteI knew it when she offered to make supper! Very well written
ReplyDeleteAs soon as the mom said she was going to make the meal, I knew something was up lol.
ReplyDeleteThat was truly a labor day weekend
ReplyDeleteThe whole time I was thinking don't eat the food and what does he do he ate the food. :P
ReplyDeleteI just realized I didn't actually comment on the story itself. Very well written; love the foreshadowing!
ReplyDeleteMajor plot twist! I can't believe a mother would do that! Crazy!
ReplyDeleteHOLY COW WHAT THE HECK.... IM SPEECHLESS. Even knowing the spoiler before reading the story still makes it interesting.
ReplyDeleteI didn't read the comments before reading the story! so HA. What a crazy twist!!
ReplyDeleteWow..... didn't see that coming ;)
ReplyDeleteDid not see that one coming!
ReplyDeleteThe ending was crazy! I couldn't believe it was the mother?
ReplyDeleteholy plot twist!
ReplyDeleteWhat the plot twist!
ReplyDeletevery well written and good plot twist
ReplyDeleteWhoa that plot twist! Great story~
ReplyDeleteVery good loved the plot!
ReplyDeleteI saw that coming. And i'm not happy about the husbands death! What a terrible mother! But good plot..
ReplyDeleteLove the plot twist
ReplyDeletePoor guys! I knew that was going to happen! Great story.
ReplyDeletegreat story
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