Click, Click, Boom
Click Click Boom. Thats a pretty decent song, and this story is decent too! Love the ending, it made me laugh.
I liked the setting, good story
Interesting Characters. It was a reasonable story.
i liked you characters names< kept it interesting!
i liked then name click click boom
i liked your character names!
It's always the quiet ones that get ya.
The story was good and had great description throughout.
Interesting story
Good story!
Nice story I really liked the names!
Nice story and interesting names! Interesting how the rhinoceros helped them out.
The names were very interesting.
I liked the characters and the setting!
I liked the names of the characters!
GREAT NAMES OF THE CHARACTERS
I liked how descriptive this story was. Good story!
Nice story!
The names were really unique! :)
Great story. Names were great!
Enjoyed reading this story!
That was truly an african safari
The ending was very suspenseful
Funny names like Marty and Nigel! Good Story!
This story was was very entertaining.
Very good, I liked the intensity
This story was very interesting! Written well.
Click Click Boom! interesting story!
Wow...Nigel is not what everyone thought, eh? I'd watch out for him!It's not often I see the proper use of "there" and "their" in a sentence like, "There is their pack!" Good job!
Loved the names!
Click Click! Awesome Name haha
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Click, Click, Boom
ReplyDeleteClick Click Boom. Thats a pretty decent song, and this story is decent too! Love the ending, it made me laugh.
ReplyDeleteI liked the setting, good story
ReplyDeleteInteresting Characters. It was a reasonable story.
ReplyDeletei liked you characters names< kept it interesting!
ReplyDeletei liked then name click click boom
ReplyDeletei liked your character names!
ReplyDeleteIt's always the quiet ones that get ya.
ReplyDeleteThe story was good and had great description throughout.
ReplyDeleteInteresting story
ReplyDeleteGood story!
ReplyDeleteNice story I really liked the names!
ReplyDeleteNice story and interesting names! Interesting how the rhinoceros helped them out.
ReplyDeleteThe names were very interesting.
ReplyDeleteI liked the characters and the setting!
ReplyDeleteI liked the names of the characters!
ReplyDeleteGREAT NAMES OF THE CHARACTERS
ReplyDeleteI liked how descriptive this story was. Good story!
ReplyDeleteNice story!
ReplyDeleteThe names were really unique! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat story. Names were great!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading this story!
ReplyDeleteThat was truly an african safari
ReplyDeleteThe ending was very suspenseful
ReplyDeleteFunny names like Marty and Nigel! Good Story!
ReplyDeleteThis story was was very entertaining.
ReplyDeleteVery good, I liked the intensity
ReplyDeleteThis story was very interesting! Written well.
ReplyDeleteClick Click Boom! interesting story!
ReplyDeleteWow...Nigel is not what everyone thought, eh? I'd watch out for him!
ReplyDeleteIt's not often I see the proper use of "there" and "their" in a sentence like, "There is their pack!" Good job!
Loved the names!
ReplyDeleteClick Click! Awesome Name haha
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