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I really liked your story. I thought it was very cute.
Great story! I liked the idea you were going with
This is so cute! I like it
I like the plot twist c:
I really like the plot of the story. It was really cute and heart warming
Loved this story. Great idea for s story!
I love this story. Good plot and I loved how soft and touching it was
Very cute idea and loved the ending!
I love this story! Melted my heart :)
I loved the plot twist!
The winner for Most Heart Warming goes to you. Loved the plot twist.
Loved the plot twist. This story was really sweet :)
Major plot twist. I loved how this story can actually relate to some people and while parts of it were sad, it had a great outcome.
The feels from this story.
Chills, Lots of Chills. In a good way. Great Story!
You would think the title would tip me off, but nooooo. Now it has even more meaning. :)
I really liked it, BTW.
Very good story!
So sweet! I just love happy endings.
Great Story, the plot twist is so weird!
I loved the story, warm fuzzy feelings :3
Great story. Made my heart cry.
truly a work of art and wizardry. 8/8 really gr8 m8.
great story
I thought it was very well thought out
GOOD STORY :D :) :P :O = ) =(
Awesome Story! The ending was really good, Honestly it surprised me!
i liked how she turned out to be her sister!
It was a great story and Had a great ending
What a great ending. Well done.
I love the ending
Very touching
I really liked the plot twist! Very good!
I like what it was about. The family finally coming together. I want to know if they finally stayed there or if the dad married the mom.
i like this. i was super cute
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ReplyDeleteThe feels from this story.
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