Monday, October 20, 2014

Story #3: The Pizza Run

35 comments:

  1. Where you by chance.....Hungry when you wrote this??

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  2. Amazing story. Super funny too!

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  3. Very comical story

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  4. I like the names in the story!

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  5. Interesting story. Funny in some parts

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  6. Comical story. Nice names.

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  7. This story was hilarious, I love the references to our class.

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  8. Loved the names. The story made me laugh

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  9. Nice names. Couldn't help but laugh while reading this story.~

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  10. I actually laughed, for real, at this one. NICE JOB

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  11. Hilarious story. This is like a modern day Three Stooges. #Go Gen

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  12. So funny. Great story!

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  13. "...dreaded Mrs. Orman's class..." This must be a typo. You meant "...awesome and can't-wait-for and never-want-it-to-end Mrs. Orman's class..." Right?

    I am now craving some chocolate-covered snickerdoodles. Like, those should really be a thing because they sound amazing.

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  14. This cracked me up, and the names were pretty clever!

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  15. I thought this was a really funny story

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  16. It was very well-written and pretty funny! Also, the names were soooo creative! =D

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  17. Well Swen Oullivan. You out did yourself my friend.

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  18. I loved how the names were switched up! Very funny!

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  19. Clever name choice. It was funny

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  20. That's a whole lotta pizzazz :D

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  21. I laughed my butt off. Great stuff Sowen.

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  22. Loved the name changing, laughed throughout the whole thing!

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  23. Laughed during this. Nice names.

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  24. I like how original your names are

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  25. it was very funny and entertaining!

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  26. I love it! Gen and his brownies! I got a good laugh!

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  27. I like how the names got switched. Good story.

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  28. It was a good laugh! Loved the originality of the names.

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  29. It would've been better with more Wordan Jesterfield

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  30. Have the 4th person at ur table and it would be fine. still funny

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  31. funny stuff. i love the names!

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