This story was so cute I'm so glad they ended up getting together :)
This was so cute!! I love how it was short and to the point
Aw, I like the resolution, Cute Story!
Cute story! I liked the ending.
All the other comments are saying the story was "cute." I completely agree...I think. Good story! :)
Oh, that ending!
Totally swaggy plot twist
Great ending! Good job.
I liked the ending. It was cool how they both ended up together.
That ending yo.
I really like this story. It's both humorous and cute. Great job on writing it.
I thought it was going to be a scary story. It ended up being so cute
^^^^^ THAT ^^^^^ is exactly what I thought, too!Totally thought you were going in a different direction. I'm really liking how respectful Callum is. Tag. Love it.
Away was truly running
So cute how they ended up together in the end!
Cute love story. The title of the story makes you think that it is going to turn out completely different- you trickster. Well written.
That was such a cute little story. I thought that it was gonna be really depressing but it was adorable!!!(:
Who doesn't like a nice game of tag?
Cute Story!
I really thought that Callum was going to be creepy, you really did well to throw me off!
Character twist! (Instead of a plot twist haha... uhm.) Haha anyway glad they ended up together.~
Great Story!
great story though it was gonna be depressing
Great story, Loved the ending!
Give me sequel now!!
Awwwww! I loved it! :)
I'm glad Skye and Callum got together! Great story!
Callum made it out of the friend zone! Congrats to those two! ;)
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This story was so cute I'm so glad they ended up getting together :)
ReplyDeleteThis was so cute!! I love how it was short and to the point
ReplyDeleteAw, I like the resolution, Cute Story!
ReplyDeleteCute story! I liked the ending.
ReplyDeleteAll the other comments are saying the story was "cute." I completely agree...I think. Good story! :)
ReplyDeleteOh, that ending!
ReplyDeleteTotally swaggy plot twist
ReplyDeleteGreat ending! Good job.
ReplyDeleteI liked the ending. It was cool how they both ended up together.
ReplyDeleteThat ending yo.
ReplyDeleteI really like this story. It's both humorous and cute. Great job on writing it.
ReplyDeleteI thought it was going to be a scary story. It ended up being so cute
ReplyDelete^^^^^ THAT ^^^^^ is exactly what I thought, too!
ReplyDeleteTotally thought you were going in a different direction. I'm really liking how respectful Callum is.
Tag. Love it.
Away was truly running
ReplyDeleteSo cute how they ended up together in the end!
ReplyDeleteCute love story. The title of the story makes you think that it is going to turn out completely different- you trickster. Well written.
ReplyDeleteThat was such a cute little story. I thought that it was gonna be really depressing but it was adorable!!!(:
ReplyDeleteWho doesn't like a nice game of tag?
ReplyDeleteCute Story!
ReplyDeleteI really thought that Callum was going to be creepy, you really did well to throw me off!
ReplyDeleteCharacter twist! (Instead of a plot twist haha... uhm.) Haha anyway glad they ended up together.~
ReplyDeleteGreat Story!
ReplyDeletegreat story though it was gonna be depressing
ReplyDeleteGreat story, Loved the ending!
ReplyDeleteGive me sequel now!!
ReplyDeleteAwwwww! I loved it! :)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad Skye and Callum got together! Great story!
ReplyDeleteCallum made it out of the friend zone! Congrats to those two! ;)
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