The last wish. Wow. Bittersweet, for sure. Except the last line, I was like, "What just happened? When did he wish that?" So I think you could expand that part even further, or hint to us above that he had another secret wish.
Two of the three wishes were normal you know, money... sports cars.... infinite wealth, but the third was a major changing point in the story and it made it all the better.
Well I guess you should be careful what you wish for. Loved the ending.
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ReplyDeleteGreat storyline!
ReplyDeleteOh nook did he die!? Awwww.... ehh still a cute story! (:
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading about Paul and his wife
ReplyDeleteGood set up/outline of the story. Well put together.
ReplyDeleteI loved how he wished to have one last cup with her and the ending of this story was the perfect way to end the plot.
ReplyDeleteLoved it when he wanted to share one last cup of coffee with his wife!
ReplyDeleteI thought this story was absolutely adorable(:
ReplyDeleteSo cute how he gets to see his wife again.
ReplyDeleteLoved the amazing plot twist. it was just amazing! :)
ReplyDeleteLoved the plot twist! Adorable!
ReplyDeleteLast cup of coffee was so cute
ReplyDeleteGreat story!
ReplyDeleteThis was a great story! I loved the last part with the coffee... So cute! :)
ReplyDeleteCrazy ending to the story!
ReplyDeleteGood story.
ReplyDeleteWhat a twist!
ReplyDeleteReally good story!
ReplyDeleteIt was good! Just got really confused at the end though! He died?
ReplyDeletegood story i liked it
ReplyDeleteThe ending is so nice, and kind of sad!
ReplyDeleteGlad to know he whited for one last meal with his wife.
ReplyDeleteLast wish was cute but also sad at the end~ I liked the story
ReplyDeletePaul truly did have three wishes.
ReplyDeleteI like this story, the end is nice too
ReplyDeleteLoved the three wishes!
ReplyDeleteAwesome ending!
ReplyDeleteThe story was a really cute! But, I was confused at the end. Did Paul die?
ReplyDeleteThe last wish. Wow. Bittersweet, for sure.
ReplyDeleteExcept the last line, I was like, "What just happened? When did he wish that?"
So I think you could expand that part even further, or hint to us above that he had another secret wish.
I liked the story the ends a bit confusing though
ReplyDeleteGreat story
ReplyDeleteGreat story! Loved his three wishes!
ReplyDeleteTwo of the three wishes were normal you know, money... sports cars.... infinite wealth, but the third was a major changing point in the story and it made it all the better.
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