Very nice loved the moral
Good Job. Nice plot.
The story had a good moral and intense plot.
i loved the ending it was very nice
I liked the plot and it was well written.
I loved the ending and it had good description.
The plot was great! I liked how you showed a character's view through the purge apart from the movie.
Loved the story. Good advice at the end about the boss. :)
Very good! I could picture the whole story in my head!
Great Story! Love the ending.
Nice plot! Love the concept.
Nice Story!
It was pretty tight but it could of gone a page longer
Had to giggle at the end of it. Pretty funny ending. I enjoyed it!
pretty good story, could have been longer and said more
Lol liked the ending advice(:
This was way better the the movie the Purge.
Great plot very well written
So his boss was a good guy after all...interesting. I was not expecting you to be saved at all. Nice twist.
I liked the twos, never expected it be a boss from a job. Good moral.
The ending was a good surprise!
#guccimoral
I think the story was pretty good overall. I liked how mentioned the boss giving you a thumbs up 👍
Short, but I thought the ending was funny. :D
The ending was a cool twist and I liked the moral. :)
That is really power taking
I loved the suspense! I did not expect the ending, I thought he was gonna die
I didn't expect that ending. It was really short, I liked it
Absolutely loved this story!
Intense, next time add even more awesomeness!
Loved the twist!
Reminds me of something good story
I liked the twist with the horrible boss
I love the plot to this story
The Moral though! It is the greatest moral of all time! It also had a great twist to go along with it!
One of my favorite stories so far! Good work.
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Very nice loved the moral
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ReplyDeleteI liked the plot and it was well written.
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ReplyDeleteThe plot was great! I liked how you showed a character's view through the purge apart from the movie.
ReplyDeleteLoved the story. Good advice at the end about the boss. :)
ReplyDeleteVery good! I could picture the whole story in my head!
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ReplyDeleteNice plot! Love the concept.
ReplyDeleteNice Story!
ReplyDeleteIt was pretty tight but it could of gone a page longer
ReplyDeleteHad to giggle at the end of it. Pretty funny ending. I enjoyed it!
ReplyDeletepretty good story, could have been longer and said more
ReplyDeleteLol liked the ending advice(:
ReplyDeleteThis was way better the the movie the Purge.
ReplyDeleteGreat plot very well written
ReplyDeleteSo his boss was a good guy after all...interesting. I was not expecting you to be saved at all. Nice twist.
ReplyDeleteI liked the twos, never expected it be a boss from a job. Good moral.
ReplyDeleteThe ending was a good surprise!
ReplyDelete#guccimoral
ReplyDeleteI think the story was pretty good overall. I liked how mentioned the boss giving you a thumbs up 👍
ReplyDeleteShort, but I thought the ending was funny. :D
ReplyDeleteThe ending was a cool twist and I liked the moral. :)
ReplyDeleteThat is really power taking
ReplyDeleteI loved the suspense! I did not expect the ending, I thought he was gonna die
ReplyDeleteI didn't expect that ending. It was really short, I liked it
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely loved this story!
ReplyDeleteIntense, next time add even more awesomeness!
ReplyDeleteLoved the twist!
ReplyDeleteReminds me of something good story
ReplyDeleteI liked the twist with the horrible boss
ReplyDeleteI love the plot to this story
ReplyDeleteThe Moral though! It is the greatest moral of all time! It also had a great twist to go along with it!
ReplyDeleteOne of my favorite stories so far! Good work.
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