I thought the ending was great, how a horrible situation became an inspiring one
Amazing story the ending was so good.
I'm glad they ended up happy! It was a very nice story!
Love the happy ending!~
Home life was explained well, and was kept throughout the whole story. Although it was sad, I enjoyed the ending.
Sad. The title fit well with the story
Sad story, but the ending fits it perfectly. Great Job.
Very good description. I liked the ending
I really liked the ending. I liked how they both got a fresh start. Awesome story.
Inspiring. Good job!
Amazing story
Very sad story, love the ending!
That sister was truly a mother
i liked how it ended!
Makes you realize to be grateful for everything you have!
I loved this story! I felt that I could almost relate to the characters. :)
I loved the story! I wonder how the rest of their lives go...
Great story and loved the ending!
Im glad they got a nice home in the end
Aww, I love stories like these. Happy endings make me happy. :)
Love how they both are in a safe home now!
Loved this story
I like the ending the best. :)
I ENJOYED THE ENDING
Amazing way to end it.
good story happy ending.
Wonderful ending! Very well-written.
Great ending
such a cute story! And a great happy ending!
Perfect ending! Poor girls. No one should ever be treated like that.
The part where Julia ran away and couldn't be found was tough to read because of having a little sister, but I really like the story and the ending!
Glad she has a good big sister!
the ending was the best
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I thought the ending was great, how a horrible situation became an inspiring one
ReplyDeleteAmazing story the ending was so good.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad they ended up happy! It was a very nice story!
ReplyDeleteLove the happy ending!~
ReplyDeleteHome life was explained well, and was kept throughout the whole story. Although it was sad, I enjoyed the ending.
ReplyDeleteSad. The title fit well with the story
ReplyDeleteSad story, but the ending fits it perfectly. Great Job.
ReplyDeleteVery good description. I liked the ending
ReplyDeleteI really liked the ending. I liked how they both got a fresh start. Awesome story.
ReplyDeleteInspiring. Good job!
ReplyDeleteAmazing story
ReplyDeleteVery sad story, love the ending!
ReplyDeleteThat sister was truly a mother
ReplyDeletei liked how it ended!
ReplyDeleteMakes you realize to be grateful for everything you have!
ReplyDeleteI loved this story! I felt that I could almost relate to the characters. :)
ReplyDeleteI loved the story! I wonder how the rest of their lives go...
ReplyDeleteGreat story and loved the ending!
ReplyDeleteIm glad they got a nice home in the end
ReplyDeleteAww, I love stories like these. Happy endings make me happy. :)
ReplyDeleteLove how they both are in a safe home now!
ReplyDeleteLoved this story
ReplyDeleteI like the ending the best. :)
ReplyDeleteI ENJOYED THE ENDING
ReplyDeleteAmazing way to end it.
ReplyDeletegood story happy ending.
ReplyDeleteWonderful ending! Very well-written.
ReplyDeleteGreat ending
ReplyDeletesuch a cute story! And a great happy ending!
ReplyDeletePerfect ending! Poor girls. No one should ever be treated like that.
ReplyDeleteThe part where Julia ran away and couldn't be found was tough to read because of having a little sister, but I really like the story and the ending!
ReplyDeleteGlad she has a good big sister!
ReplyDeletethe ending was the best
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