This story was definitely different, but nonetheless it was good.
Good description and interesting story! Nice names, btw c:
This story was very interesting, but good! I also thought the names were interesting. lol
This was an interesting story. Well written and the names were cool.
This story was very interesting, but still a good story
A very off ending but I liked it all the same
Beyonce, "Who dat!."
The character names kept me reading.
The characters' names were really funny :3
Very interesting plot. But well written
Well written story and love the makeup added to it. I love Sephora!
Interesting moral, great story
Interesting! Creative names
i liked how Beyonce was in it
Ehhh, I still love old people.
That truly was Kandee's Krazy last day
Good Story! Funny names!
Crazy old lady... I knew from the beginning she was a psycho
Crazy old people, can't trust them...
I agree with Orman7. People are crazy. Great story!
Some people are crazy! Good Story!!
Very interesting!
I feel bad for Kandee
Good Job!
I kept thinking, "No! Don't stay late! Get the heck out of there!" Because, stereotypically, that's when the crazy ax-murdering grandma would jump out of the shadows and kill all the characters. So good job with the plot twist!
Great names!
Good story very well written.
Good story!
Great story!
Great Story! Crazy people!
Scared of Old People? That would probably be hard to do..Kandee was really funny though :)
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This story was definitely different, but nonetheless it was good.
ReplyDeleteGood description and interesting story! Nice names, btw c:
ReplyDeleteThis story was very interesting, but good! I also thought the names were interesting. lol
ReplyDeleteThis was an interesting story. Well written and the names were cool.
ReplyDeleteThis story was very interesting, but still a good story
ReplyDeleteA very off ending but I liked it all the same
ReplyDeleteBeyonce, "Who dat!."
ReplyDeleteThe character names kept me reading.
ReplyDeleteThe characters' names were really funny :3
ReplyDeleteVery interesting plot. But well written
ReplyDeleteWell written story and love the makeup added to it. I love Sephora!
ReplyDeleteInteresting moral, great story
ReplyDeleteInteresting! Creative names
ReplyDeletei liked how Beyonce was in it
ReplyDeleteEhhh, I still love old people.
ReplyDeleteThat truly was Kandee's Krazy last day
ReplyDeleteGood Story! Funny names!
ReplyDeleteCrazy old lady... I knew from the beginning she was a psycho
ReplyDeleteCrazy old people, can't trust them...
ReplyDeleteI agree with Orman7. People are crazy. Great story!
ReplyDeleteSome people are crazy! Good Story!!
ReplyDeleteVery interesting!
ReplyDeleteI feel bad for Kandee
ReplyDeleteGood Job!
ReplyDeleteI kept thinking, "No! Don't stay late! Get the heck out of there!" Because, stereotypically, that's when the crazy ax-murdering grandma would jump out of the shadows and kill all the characters. So good job with the plot twist!
ReplyDeleteGreat names!
ReplyDeleteGood story very well written.
ReplyDeleteGood story!
ReplyDeleteGreat story!
ReplyDeleteGreat Story! Crazy people!
ReplyDeleteScared of Old People? That would probably be hard to do..Kandee was really funny though :)
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