I can honestly say that this story was incredible and possibly one of my favorites. It's terribly sad and you tell how passionate the author is. You should be proud of writing such a great story.
Brought tears to my eyes. Your intense description and use of similes is astounding. Some of my favorites: "burn out like a cheap candle from IKEA," "a traffic cone at a rave," "bright headlights creating jagged lines in the sky," and "the pain was white hot..." Very well written!
There is a quote that would have gone well with this story. "Run every race with a suicide pace, because today is a good day to die." Cus.... the girl kinda died while running. ANYWAYS, Great Story, I'm going to go home and run now (:
Oh my gosh! This was, by far, the best story I have read, yet! I was not expecting that outcome (for her to die), but it made the story so much more intense! Wonderful job!
I can honestly say that this story was incredible and possibly one of my favorites. It's terribly sad and you tell how passionate the author is. You should be proud of writing such a great story.
ReplyDeleteThis was a tearjerker. This was such a good story. Very well written! Awesome job!
ReplyDeleteThis was an amazing story and was very well written!! Good job!
ReplyDeleteThis is truly inspiring :)
ReplyDeleteAn Amazing Story very inspiring.
ReplyDeleteGreat story. Very sad but I loved the emotion that was put into it~ c:
ReplyDeleteThe author had me at the introduction. I truly was hooked to this story. Well done!
ReplyDeleteA very intriguing story! The characters were so full of personality!
ReplyDeleteBrought tears to my eyes.
ReplyDeleteYour intense description and use of similes is astounding. Some of my favorites: "burn out like a cheap candle from IKEA," "a traffic cone at a rave," "bright headlights creating jagged lines in the sky," and "the pain was white hot..." Very well written!
Such a good story with great visuals.
ReplyDeletethat was an amazing story! i think you might've even inspired me to start running! :)
ReplyDeleteVery good story! I loved "Burn out like a cheap candle from IKEA!" made me laugh!
ReplyDeleteBest over all story by far! Every word left me wanting more. Great description and so much passion.
ReplyDelete(Friends re-runs are my favorite!)
That truly was a secret society
ReplyDeleteThere is a quote that would have gone well with this story. "Run every race with a suicide pace, because today is a good day to die." Cus.... the girl kinda died while running. ANYWAYS, Great Story, I'm going to go home and run now (:
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DeleteGreat story! It was funny, yet it was inspirational.
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh! This was, by far, the best story I have read, yet! I was not expecting that outcome (for her to die), but it made the story so much more intense! Wonderful job!
ReplyDeleteVery well written!
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing story!
ReplyDeleteI loved this story!
ReplyDeleteI loved the story! Very well written!
ReplyDeletegood story well written
ReplyDeleteAmazing story. Very inspirational. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteAmazing story! Running is fun when you're in shape! Not when you're not! Loved it! Very inspiring!
ReplyDeleteRunning and Friends Re-Runs? Definitely don't know who wrote this amazing story! Great Job loved every minute I spent reading ! (:
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely loved it! One of my favorites. Very well written.
ReplyDeleteWell written story, i loved it.
ReplyDeleteLike a Cheap Candle from Ikea! Hahaha too funny :) Good story!
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