This was a fantastic story. I like how the main character overcame his mistake the previous year and the way that the author used that to end the story.
I don't know baseball, but a state champs sounds good no matter what, great story
This was a great story. I'm glad Dale's team won.
This was a really good story I'm glad he knew how to overcome his mistakes and win!!
Sweet story
Go! Dale.
Great story.~ Happy that Dale overcame his challenges so his t team won.
I like the author's form of writing. Good sports story.
I really liked the whole story! It was very descriptive and easy to follow!
Great sports story!
loved that it was about baseball!!
I bet Dale's dad was pretty ticked about him giving up a walk-off home run the previous year. Good thing he redeemed himself, huh!? ;) Seriously, though, that would be pretty nice to strike out the state's best hitter on a change-up. Good story.
Loved the story- m=never stopped reading and I don't even like baseball!
Great story even though I was the one who hit the walk off home run
Great story!
That truly was the 54th out
Very good story! It shows even if you let a home run or something go you can over come that and come back to win!
Go Dale!! Go Dale. Woot woot. Good story
Loved this story so much!
I wonder who Dale Norman is.. hmmm... Great story!! Even though I don't understand Baseball very well x)
Great story "Dale" -_- lol Great job.
Good Story!
Great story Dale!
good story I liked the ending
This was a really good story! I loved it. The names sounded pretty familiar!
Great story! I love myself a good baseball story! It was great!
Im glad dales team won.
Dale is Awesome, So glad that he got that final out this time! :)
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This was a fantastic story. I like how the main character overcame his mistake the previous year and the way that the author used that to end the story.
ReplyDeleteI don't know baseball, but a state champs sounds good no matter what, great story
ReplyDeleteThis was a great story. I'm glad Dale's team won.
ReplyDeleteThis was a really good story I'm glad he knew how to overcome his mistakes and win!!
ReplyDeleteSweet story
ReplyDeleteGo! Dale.
ReplyDeleteGreat story.~ Happy that Dale overcame his challenges so his t team won.
ReplyDeleteI like the author's form of writing. Good sports story.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the whole story! It was very descriptive and easy to follow!
ReplyDeleteGreat sports story!
ReplyDeleteloved that it was about baseball!!
ReplyDeleteI bet Dale's dad was pretty ticked about him giving up a walk-off home run the previous year. Good thing he redeemed himself, huh!? ;)
ReplyDeleteSeriously, though, that would be pretty nice to strike out the state's best hitter on a change-up. Good story.
Loved the story- m=never stopped reading and I don't even like baseball!
ReplyDeleteGreat story even though I was the one who hit the walk off home run
ReplyDeleteGreat story!
ReplyDeleteThat truly was the 54th out
ReplyDeleteVery good story! It shows even if you let a home run or something go you can over come that and come back to win!
ReplyDeleteGo Dale!! Go Dale. Woot woot. Good story
ReplyDeleteLoved this story so much!
ReplyDeleteI wonder who Dale Norman is.. hmmm... Great story!! Even though I don't understand Baseball very well x)
ReplyDeleteGreat story "Dale" -_- lol Great job.
ReplyDeleteGood Story!
ReplyDeleteGreat story!
ReplyDeleteGreat story!
ReplyDeleteGood Story!
ReplyDeleteGreat story Dale!
ReplyDeletegood story I liked the ending
ReplyDeleteThis was a really good story! I loved it. The names sounded pretty familiar!
ReplyDeleteGreat story! I love myself a good baseball story! It was great!
ReplyDeleteIm glad dales team won.
ReplyDeleteDale is Awesome, So glad that he got that final out this time! :)
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