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This is the best thing ever. This is better than my poem:Roses are redViolets are blueI liked this storyAnd you did tooDon't lie,Chicken fry
I love twist of the polar bear driving a truck.
That polar bear came out of nowhere. I wouldn't go back without smores either!
Wowzers. That was different to say the least, however I really liked it. It was vey funny.
Very random, not a bad story.
Didn't expect it to end that way! Also third paragraph it says polar pear instead of polar bear
The way the story jumps to the next events so quickly, I just found it very funny and random.
That was extra creative, my friend.
Very interesting to say the least. Funny though
I loved, loved, loved, how short this one was. And it was super funny as well! :)
Short and to the point... HALLELUJAH!
Super random and super funny!
So many plot twists! Wonderful!
Funny and very interesting c:
Umm... It was out-there and good
Nice story! Way to twist it.
Polar Bears like smores!
I'm glad one of the friends got out of there alive!
The polar bear came out of no where! I'm never going in the woods without s'mores again!
Funny and creative story! Crazy polar bear!
Funny and very good! I'm never going into the woods ever again!
liked the story very funny
Very funny and creative! Great story!
Very funny! Nice plot twist.
i liked the thats how they roll part! very funny
Very funny story :D
I like polar bears cute story
There truly was four friends and a polar bear
That was an interesting story, very funny!
That was definitely an interesting story to say the least, lol. I liked the plot twist!
This was quite interesting!
Pretty Funny!
Short too the point
Very funny. Nice work :)
Very funny! I enjoyed it!
Wow--a polar bear at a bonfire! Who would have thought?Very exciting!
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ReplyDeleteThis is the best thing ever.
ReplyDeleteThis is better than my poem:
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I liked this story
And you did too
Don't lie,
Chicken fry
I love twist of the polar bear driving a truck.
ReplyDeleteThat polar bear came out of nowhere. I wouldn't go back without smores either!
ReplyDeleteWowzers. That was different to say the least, however I really liked it. It was vey funny.
ReplyDeleteVery random, not a bad story.
ReplyDeleteDidn't expect it to end that way! Also third paragraph it says polar pear instead of polar bear
ReplyDeleteThe way the story jumps to the next events so quickly, I just found it very funny and random.
ReplyDeleteThat was extra creative, my friend.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting to say the least. Funny though
ReplyDeleteI loved, loved, loved, how short this one was. And it was super funny as well! :)
ReplyDeleteShort and to the point... HALLELUJAH!
ReplyDeleteSuper random and super funny!
ReplyDeleteSo many plot twists! Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteFunny and very interesting c:
ReplyDeleteUmm... It was out-there and good
ReplyDeleteNice story! Way to twist it.
ReplyDeletePolar Bears like smores!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad one of the friends got out of there alive!
ReplyDeleteThe polar bear came out of no where! I'm never going in the woods without s'mores again!
ReplyDeleteFunny and creative story! Crazy polar bear!
ReplyDeleteFunny and very good! I'm never going into the woods ever again!
ReplyDeleteliked the story very funny
ReplyDeleteVery funny and creative! Great story!
ReplyDeleteVery funny! Nice plot twist.
ReplyDeletei liked the thats how they roll part! very funny
ReplyDeleteVery funny story :D
ReplyDeleteI like polar bears cute story
ReplyDeleteThere truly was four friends and a polar bear
ReplyDeleteThat was an interesting story, very funny!
ReplyDeleteThat was definitely an interesting story to say the least, lol. I liked the plot twist!
ReplyDeleteThis was quite interesting!
ReplyDeletePretty Funny!
ReplyDeleteShort too the point
ReplyDeleteVery funny. Nice work :)
ReplyDeleteVery funny! I enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteWow--a polar bear at a bonfire! Who would have thought?
ReplyDeleteVery exciting!