I thought this was an incredible story. I like how it reaches out to people who are having rough time and let's them know that it's okay to ask for help.
Straight to the heart. I've thought about how what you do effects other people and this explains it perfectly. There are always going to be people out there wanting to help you and be your friend. You just have to find them! Great story!
I really like the moral. It was a really god story :)
ReplyDeleteI love this story. It reminds me of my favorite movie "To Save A Life". This story is really great.
ReplyDeleteThe moral is great
ReplyDeleteI like how different it is from all the other stories. Your story had a great message
ReplyDeleteReally good stories! It shows how there really are people out there supporting you!
ReplyDeleteThe intro pulled me into reading the whole story. Loved the moral.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad he is finding his way.
ReplyDeleteI agree with steimle05! Also very well done.
ReplyDeleteGreat story! I agree with 501MustRead!
ReplyDeleteI thought this was an incredible story. I like how it reaches out to people who are having rough time and let's them know that it's okay to ask for help.
ReplyDeleteI can definitely relate to David. I love this story because it's more then a story to me.
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing story and it has a great message to it.
ReplyDeleteStraight to the heart. I've thought about how what you do effects other people and this explains it perfectly. There are always going to be people out there wanting to help you and be your friend. You just have to find them! Great story!
ReplyDeleteThis story is beautiful, i like how it makes seeking help not such a bad thing, and shows that it actually can change lives.
ReplyDeleteThe moral of the story was great.
ReplyDeleteThe story has a great message that inspird me!
ReplyDeleteThis was a beautiful story! I love the moral at the end. I also thought the hook was great and it really pulled me in.
ReplyDeleteI liked the descriptive details.
ReplyDeleteThe story had a good moral and very good details.
ReplyDeleteThat story truly found its way
ReplyDeleteI loved this story! It had great meaning behind it and wonderful details.
ReplyDeletei loved the moral of the story!
ReplyDeleteThis story has a great moral! I really enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this story!
ReplyDeleteGreat moral, loved the story!
ReplyDeleteVery good story!!! The moral is very well expressed.
ReplyDeleteGreat story, great moral!
ReplyDeleteThis story was really touching and is relatable to some people.
ReplyDeletethis story has very good morals.
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed reading the story
ReplyDeleteSuch a great message for everyone! Touching story!
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