Loved the ending it was a great story :)
I love the ending, I didn't see it coming. Great Plot!
Aw, I loved how you tied things together in the end.
This story tugged my heart strings. Glad Blake was found.
Great Story! Loved the happy ending!
Your story was incredible. I love how, while it's sad that she has to step up to the plate as a parental figure, she does it so well. I also, love the slight plot twist about their father. All around great story.
I want a sequel!
Loved the ending! Keep writing like this!
Great Story! I really liked how no part of the story went too fast, it was very well planned out!
Great Story. Really loved how it was written and the ending
this needs to be a movie it's that good of a story
This story warmed my heart!
Great story, thank god for Ghost Dad.
Amazing! I'm still thinking about the ending! I loved it!
The story's ending was so great. It was a touching story!
Okay, it is official. You need to write another story that leads off of this one!!
Great story I got kind of scared because I thought Blake died
Amazing story!
I loved the end! Was curious about what actually happened with their dad.~
He was truly missing.
i loved the ending defiantly did not expect that!
Absolutely incredible story! Very well written!
Sad, and happy. Great story, very well written.
Very good!!
Loved the plot twist about the dad!
This story was very solid. Well written. Good job!
This is such an amazing story
I loved how at the end the dad had spoken to Blake! It was very mysterious.
It was a great end to the upsetting story in the beginning! Touching
well written good story
I really liked the dialogue!
I kept thinking, "It's a trap!" Great suspense and very well written!
Loved the part about her dad and the ending!
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Loved the ending it was a great story :)
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ReplyDeleteThis story tugged my heart strings. Glad Blake was found.
ReplyDeleteGreat Story! Loved the happy ending!
ReplyDeleteYour story was incredible. I love how, while it's sad that she has to step up to the plate as a parental figure, she does it so well. I also, love the slight plot twist about their father. All around great story.
ReplyDeleteI want a sequel!
ReplyDeleteLoved the ending! Keep writing like this!
ReplyDeleteGreat Story! I really liked how no part of the story went too fast, it was very well planned out!
ReplyDeleteGreat Story. Really loved how it was written and the ending
ReplyDeletethis needs to be a movie it's that good of a story
ReplyDeleteThis story warmed my heart!
ReplyDeleteGreat story, thank god for Ghost Dad.
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ReplyDeleteThe story's ending was so great. It was a touching story!
ReplyDeleteOkay, it is official. You need to write another story that leads off of this one!!
ReplyDeleteGreat story I got kind of scared because I thought Blake died
ReplyDeleteAmazing story!
ReplyDeleteI loved the end! Was curious about what actually happened with their dad.~
ReplyDeleteHe was truly missing.
ReplyDeletei loved the ending defiantly did not expect that!
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ReplyDeleteSad, and happy. Great story, very well written.
ReplyDeleteVery good!!
ReplyDeleteLoved the plot twist about the dad!
ReplyDeleteThis story was very solid. Well written. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThis is such an amazing story
ReplyDeleteI loved how at the end the dad had spoken to Blake! It was very mysterious.
ReplyDeleteIt was a great end to the upsetting story in the beginning! Touching
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ReplyDeleteI really liked the dialogue!
ReplyDeleteI kept thinking, "It's a trap!"
ReplyDeleteGreat suspense and very well written!
Loved the part about her dad and the ending!
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